第1个回答 2011-10-19
(正式国际商务函电)
Dear Sir(s)/miss/madam,
Thanks for your replying on my E-mail during your busy time. I have renewed the order
again already. Please co-operate in checking the total amount, and let me note the result.
I shall arrange the payment if the figure is correct. Please let me informed once you receive
the payment, and make arrangement of shipment for me as soon as possible. Please check and make sure if your account number is XXX or not. Contact me please if you have any other question.
I am waiting your prompt reply. And your kindly attention will be highly appreciated.
with Best Regards,
(signature)
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外贸函电简练文:
DEAR SIR(S),
THK UR REPLY MY E-ML. THE ORDER RENEWED. PLS CHK AMOUNT &(N) ACCOUNT
NO. i WL SND PAYMT IF CORRECT. PLS ALSO ADVISE ME RCVG PAYMT N ARRANGE
SHIPMT A.S.A.P.
WAITG YR PROMPT REPLY. APPRECIATE YR CO-OPERATN.
B. RGDS,
(SIGNATURE)
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英文电报文版:（按词计电报费，每词不得超过10个字母，如超过按两个词计费）
THKYRREPLY ORDERAMEND CHCKAMOUNT ACCOUNTNO. PAYMTWLSND SHIPMTASAP
ADVICERGDS
谢你回复 订单已修改 核查金额 账号 货款将会出 尽快装运
回复并感谢
（总共用7个英文电报词将全部内容表达清晰）
第2个回答 2011-10-21
商务英语信函要形式正式 语义尽量简捷明了
Dear .Mr. /Mrs. /Miss /Ms...:
I do appreciate you so much for replying to my email, since you are daily occupied. I have updated the latest order.Therefore you need to check the total price once again and tell me. Then if there is no problem, I will remit the payment to you. Please inform me (of it) as soon as the the payment is in place and then arrage the shipment A.S.A.P. Should there be any other problem, do not hesitate to contact me. Again please check your bank number:xxxx. Thank you .
第3个回答 2011-10-24
Hello. Thank your for you time to answer my email. I renewed the order sheets. Can you please check the total price and let me know after? If there is nothing wrong, I will just transfer the money to your account. Please let me know in receipt of the payment, and help me arrange the shipment as soon as possible. Do you have any question?
XXX is your account number, please verify this. Thanks.
前面的翻译很多地方问题， 有的地方完全意思不对， 望楼主自有判断。
第4个回答 2011-10-10
Dear Mr/Ms -----,
Thank you very much for replying my message. I have revised my order again. Please verify the total amount on my order and let me know whether my calculation was correct. If the amount is accurate, I will remit the money to you. Please inform me when you got the payment and arrange delivery as soon as possible. Should there be any further questions, just let me know. Please also verify your bank account information listed below:
Bank Name:
Branch Name:
Account Name:
Account Number: xxxxx
Thanks again and I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Best regards,
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第5个回答 2011-10-10
你好。
谢谢你的回复我的邮件,我给的订单的更新。你的帮助来计算总价,然后告诉我。如果是这样的话,我要给你的钱,请尽快通知我收到付款,帮我安排发运货物,你看有什么问题吗?XXX是您的账号,请查一下。谢谢