帮忙翻译下，中译英！

Question

您好：
感谢您在百忙之中回复我的邮件，我从新更新了一下订单。您帮忙计算一下总价，然后告诉我。如果无误，我就给您打款了，请您在收到货款后通知我，尽快帮我安排发货，您看还有什么问题吗？XXX是您的账号，请核对下。谢谢。

Answer 1

Dear Mr./ Ms....,
Thanks for your squeezing time to reply to my email. I have updated my orders. Would you please do me a favour and work out the total expenses and then let me know? If it is correct, payment will be remitted to you soon. Please let me know when the payment reaches you, so that I can arrange the delivery of goods. What do you think of the schedule/plan? Your bank account number is..... Please check it out. Thanks.

Answer 2

Dear Madam/Sir,

Thank you very much for taking the time to reply my email. I have updated the order. It would be great if you could re-calculate the sum and tell me afterwards. It everything is right, I will send you the payment. Please inform me as soon as you receive the payment so that I could send out the order as soon as possible. Let me know if you have further questions! Please verify your bank account information listed below:
Bank account #:

Thank you.

Best regards,
XXX

Answer 3

Dear Sir,
Thanks for you attention in advance. I updated the order, please check the amount and let me know. If it is correct, I will make the payment. Once you get the payment, please inform me and arrange shipment as soon as possible. Please help to verify your account: XXXX, am I right?
Feel free to let me know if you have any other questions,

thanks,

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之前的那些翻译太搞笑了，都是中文直译，不好。

Answer 4

Dear...,
Thank you for taking the time to reply to my mail. I have reconsidered the order, will you please sum up the total price? If everything is ready, I will post you the money. Please let me know when you get the money, and send out my good as soon as possible. Is there anything else? Please make sure XXX is your account number. Thank you.

Answer 5

Hello.Thank you for your reply to my mail, I gave the orders from the updated. Your help to calculate the total price, then tell me. If that is right, I will give you money, please inform me as soon as possible after receiving payment, help me to arrange the shipment of the goods, you see what's the problem? XXX is your account number, please check. Thank you.

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