第1个回答 2012-07-17
it was(at) 7: 15in the morning of february 8, 2011. i was walking along(a) park road towards the east while an old man came out of the park on the other sides of the street . then i saw (a) yellow car drive(driving) up(the) third street and made(making) a right turn into(the) park road . the next moment the car hit the man while she was crossing the road . he fell with a cry . the car did not stop and drive off at full speed heading west . i noticed the driver was(a) young woman wore(wearing) a pair of glasses and the plate number was(is) AC864 after two minutes later , i stopped a passed car and took the old man to the nearest hospital .
1、(at) 7: 15in the morning 时间点前用介词at
2、 i was walking along(a) park road 首次出现的可数名词前用不定冠词a
3、saw (a) yellow car 同2、
4、drive(driving) 动名词
5、 up(the) third street 序数词前用定冠词the
6、 made(making) a right turn 和上面的driving同理
7、 into(the) park road 上面已出现的名词前加the，表强调。
8、was(a) young woman 首次出现用a
9、wore(wearing) a pair of glasses 状态
10 i stopped a passed car passing 正经过的
第2个回答 2012-09-25
It was 7: 15in (改成on) the morning of february 8, 2011. I was walking along park road towards the east while (改成when) an old man came out of the park on the other sides (改成side) of the street . Then i saw (添加a)yellow car drive(改成driving) up third street and made a right turn into park road . The next moment the car hit the man while she(改成he) was crossing the road . He fell with a cry . The car did not stop and drive（改成drove） off at full speed heading west . I have noticed the driver was (添加a) young woman wore(改成wearing) a pair of glasses and the plate number was AC864 after(去掉) two minutes later , I stopped a passed (改成passing) car and took the old man to the nearest hospital .
（注：所有改错都应是下划线，否则扣分。）
第3个回答 2012-07-17
it was 7: 15 (on) the morning of february 8, 2011.
i was walking along park road towards the east
while(改成when) an old man came out of the park
on the other sides(改成side) of the street . then i saw (加 a ) yellow car drive(改成driving) up third street (去掉and) made a right turn into park road .
the next moment the car hit the man while she(改成he) was crossing the road .
he fell with a cry . the car did not stop and drive(改成drove) off at full speed heading west .
i noticed the driver was (加a)young woman wore a pair of glasses and the plate number was AC864 after(去掉after) two minutes later , i stopped a passed car and took the old man to the nearest hospjtal (拼写错误hospital).
第4个回答 2012-07-17
walking along【the】 park road
saw 【a】 yellow car 【driving 】 up 【from】third street into 【the】park road
the driver was【a】 young woman 【waring】 a pair at 【a】full speed 好久不看英语了 不知道对不对 仅供参考
第5个回答 2012-07-17
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