第1个回答 2015-02-10
it was 7: 15in (改成on) the morning of february 8, 2011. i was walking along park road towards the east while (改成when) an old man came out of the park on the other sides (改成side) of the street . then i saw (添加a)yellow car drive(改成driving) up third street and made a right turn into park road . the next moment the car hit the man while she(改成he) was crossing the road . he fell with a cry . the car did not stop and drive（改成drove） off at full speed heading west . i noticed the driver was (添加a) young woman wore(改成wearing) a pair of glasses and the plate number was AC864 after(去掉) two minutes later , i stopped a passed (改成passing) car and took the old man to the nearest hospjtal .
第2个回答 2015-02-10
第一行，plays 后加an追答
第二行,hearing -hear
第三行，happened -happen
第四行，but -and
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追答another -other
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追答第五行，late -latest
第六行，去掉being
influenced -influencing
第一行，information -informational
第三行，sounds -sound
不客气！
稍等啊
sound 可数呀！
第三行那个sounds 不变
第三行的，teach 改为teaches
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