Basically, according to the every article that I have written, there is no problem for me in the
part of outline because I can clearly list the each point of the article.
For the organizational structure, I think some of it canbe further enhanced to
improve, such as logical relationship of the sentences or not clear explanation,
which may make readers misunderstand.
Then the mistakes of the part of the word are happened with misspelling,
wrong and repeated words. So that I will look over my finished work again and
again.
Last but the most important is grammatical errors. Some of them repeated
continuously such as the changes in the plurality and verb tenses.
Not being seriously grammatical errors, they are more easily to ignore.
In short, after one-year study and the summary of the end of semester,
I will pay more attention to detail on the next writing and try my best to make it
better.
追问谢谢!!!!!!