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Question

My future
Everyone wants to know their
future, but nobody knows it. I hope my future will like that. I think I will be
an excellent lawyer in the future. I help many people who is in difficulty. I
will help the people are in need, no matter they are rich or poor. Then I think
I will have a good reputation among the society. In order to have a good body,
I will do some exercise every week. My family will be proud of me and always
stand behind me. I will work hard to reach my future. Ok, this is thefuture in my dream. What’ yours?

Answer 1

我喜欢动物，如猫，狗，金钱的，但条蛇是我favorite.Therefore，我问我的父亲，我想喂我的宠物蛇，这与他的强烈反对。他认为，蛇是危险的动物，所以，它可能会伤害你的。我不这么认为，因为大多数的蛇是朋友对人类和行动的安全，在我的的持久性perusation为父亲，他结束了与我的想法一致，而设置了严格的条件，那就是，他没有按吨购买我，直到我在下个月的考试中获得高分。听到他的话，惊喜和压力，同时涌入我的喉咙，是的，我要努力学习，以实现我的梦想。
第二天，当我遇到我的好朋友之一，她不能帮助，但感觉像被怪后，听到我说什么，我的父亲，在她的角度来看，其实大部份的女孩都害怕这样的frieghtening的动物，如蛇。也许我是一个寄予的厚望，我想，好吧，我做的把我所有的努力学习的目的，我可爱的小蛇

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Answer 2

futureEveryone错了
thinkI错了
alwaysstand错了

Answer 3

My future
Everyone wants to know their
Future, but nobody knows it. I hope my future will like that. I think I will be
An excellent lawyer in the future. I help many people who are in difficulty. I
Will help the people are in need. No matter they are rich or poor. Then I think
I will have a good reputation among the society. In order to have a good body,
I will do some exercise every week. My family will be proud of me and always
Stand behind me. I will work hard to reach my future. Ok, this is the future in my dream. What' yours?本回答被网友采纳