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Option one
Bustle of life brings extraordinary accomplishments,yet as well as weariness.Spa is dedicated to relaxing your body,heart and soul comprehensively.Relaxation of body bigins from muscles;of heart, starts with incense;of you,is from now on…
这一个特点是句式规整，词汇颇具品味，再奉上一则
option two
Living as busy as a bee, working with flying colors , yet draging a weary body.Why not enjoy the complete relaxation presented by Spa---one that soothes you physically,mentally and spiritually. Relaxation of body bigins from muscles;of heart, starts with incense;of you,is from now on…
这个更生活化（含两个俚语），更生动，有亲近感，短句式与relax的主题想契合
究竟哪个更好更合适is up to you！
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