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忙碌的生活,成就非凡,却带着一身疲倦··spa为你带来身、心、灵的全方位的放松,身体的放松从肌肉开始,心灵的放松从熏香开始,您的放松从现在开始··

要美式一点的,这句要挂在外面的广告上的,最好是俚语的··
谢谢了··

广告词写得棒,兴致来了,来个抛砖引玉吧~~
Option one
Bustle of life brings extraordinary accomplishments,yet as well as weariness.Spa is dedicated to relaxing your body,heart and soul comprehensively.Relaxation of body bigins from muscles;of heart, starts with incense;of you,is from now on…
这一个特点是句式规整,词汇颇具品味,再奉上一则

option two
Living as busy as a bee, working with flying colors , yet draging a weary body.Why not enjoy the complete relaxation presented by Spa---one that soothes you physically,mentally and spiritually. Relaxation of body bigins from muscles;of heart, starts with incense;of you,is from now on…
这个更生活化(含两个俚语),更生动,有亲近感,短句式与relax的主题想契合

究竟哪个更好更合适is up to you!
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