请帮我把这个翻译成英文吧，谢谢~比较急

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请帮我把下面这段话翻译成英语谢谢。比较急需要

当我在国庆期间去世博会参观时，我发现真是太棒了，很多东西都十分有创意，我真是太喜欢了，但我也看了一些不好现象，例如一些健全人冒充残疾人使用轮椅或几个健全人推一个轮椅从绿色通道了进入，我认为这很糟，损害了残疾人的利益，在此，我提出以下建议：
1，加强检查力度
2，通过宣传提高游客的尊重残疾人的意识
我真诚希望世博会越办越好。
请不要用翻译器………………谢谢大家，如果很好的话会加分的

Answer 1

I found it great when I visited Shanghai World Expo during National Day vacation. There are lots of
things I think to be creative and I really like them. However, I've seen some bad behavior there. For example, some healthy persons pretended to be handicapped to get the barrier free access.And some healthy people get in through the barrier free access by pushing one wheelchair together. I think it's bad and it did harm to the advantage of the disabled.My suggestion is as follow,
1, Intensify the examination of the tourists
2,Enhance the tourists'consciousness of respecting the disabled.
I sincerely hope Shanghai World Expo would be better and better

全部笔译不用机器，请采纳。有不明白欢迎再问
顺便说一下，绿色通道不是green channel，那是海关用词。。。。

Answer 2

When I was visitting the world expo in the National Day, I found that is fantansitic, a lot of creative things, I really like it,but at the same time, I also saw some bad phenomena, such as some normal people pretend to be disabled people using a wheelchair or entering Expo trough the green channel with the wheelchair, I think it's so terrible, damaged the interests of persons with disabilities, therefore, I put forward the following Suggestions
1.To strengthen the inspection
2. Promotiing of the consciousness of respecting the disabled visitors
I hope the world expo could be better and better .

更正了楼上的Chinglish和机器翻译留下的痕迹 望楼主满意~

Answer 3

I found it great when I visited Shanghai World Expo during National Day vacation. There are lots of
things I think to be creative and I really like them. However, I've seen some bad behavior there. For example, some healthy persons pretended to be handicapped to get the barrier free access.And some healthy people get in through the barrier free access by pushing one wheelchair together. I think it's bad and it did harm to the advantage of the disabled.My suggestion is as follow,
1, Intensify the examination of the tourists
2,Enhance the tourists'consciousness of respecting the disabled.
I sincerely hope Shanghai World Expo would be better and better

Answer 4

When I go to visit during the world expo in the National Day, I found that is really good, a lot of things are very creative, I really like, but I also saw some bad phenomena, such as some JianQuanRen pretend to be disabled people use a wheelchair or a few JianQuanRen push a wheelchair from the green channel enter into, I think this is very bad, harm the interests of disabled persons, in this, I put forward the following Suggestions:
1, strengthen inspection
2, through the promotion of the consciousness of the disabled visitors respect
I sincerely hope the world expo better and better.

Answer 5

When I go to visit during the world expo in the National Day, I found that is really good, a lot of things are very creative, I really like, but I also saw some bad phenomena, such as some JianQuanRen pretend to be disabled people use a wheelchair or a few JianQuanRen push a wheelchair from the green channel enter into, I think this is very bad, harm the interests of disabled persons, in this, I put forward the following Suggestions
1.To strengthen the inspection
2.Through the promotion of the consciousness of the disabled visitors respect
I sincerely hope the world expo better and better

都忘光的，帮不了你。。。。

Answer 6

When I went to the Shanghai Expo in national day period, I found it really was too good, a lot of things are very creative, I really liked it, but I have seen some bad phenomenon, such as sound as the disabled wheelchair or a few able-bodied person pushing a wheelchair from easy access to, I think this is very bad, damage the interests of the disabled, on this, I propose the following:1, strengthen the inspection dynamics2, through the promotion of tourists sense of respect for persons with disabilitiesI sincerely hope that the world will become better and better.