帮我在这篇英语作文上再加多100字左右，谢了（高中水平）

Question

Everyone has his own colorful dream ,as we know our dream can not only provide us with great power and confident , but also make us stronger and stronger ,as well as influce our attitude of life.
i've always had a dream , that is become an english teacher , because i think being a teacher is one of most interesting things in the world,it will be great fun to have classes with the children. Can you imagine how great it will be that you can practice your english easyly when you teach children,you can also tell some amusing stories or funny joes in english to make them laught in the class?then the children must love classes in so wonderful atmosphere ,and get more and more interest in learning english in shch an impress class.they will learn lots of knowledge and love english very much just like me .
i know ,it is not easy to become a teacher, so i must learn more to make myself excellent and patients.
last but not least, all our dream will come true if we have courage to achieve and Dfor them.

Answer 1

Everyone has his own colorful dream ,as we know our dream can not only provide us with great power and (confidence), but also make us stronger and stronger ,as well as (influence) our attitude of life.
I've always had a dream , that is become an english teacher , because i think being a teacher is one of most interesting things in the world, it will be great fun to have classes with the children. Can you imagine how great it will be that you can practice your english (easily) when you teach children, you can also tell some amusing stories or funny (jokes) in english to make them (laugh) in the class? then the children must love classes in so wonderful atmosphere ,and get more and more (interests) in learning english in (such) an( impressing) class. they will learn lots of knowledge and love english very much just like me .

(From now on, in order to turn my dream into reality, I will keep studying hard all the time, specially for my English. I will make a plan for the future study and never give up even if there are some difficulties during my study. First of all, I shall learn textbooks very well and then read some other books recommended by teacher. In the early morning, I will practice my listening and speaking; In the evening, I will do some reading. Generally, I have to fully prepare myself and spend every minute to study English to make sure to achieve the goal what I set for myself.)

i know, it is not easy to become a teacher, so i must learn more to make myself excellent and patients.
last but not least, all our dream will come true if we have courage to achieve and do for them.

新加了一段，约100单词左右，希望能够帮到你。此外，原文文采不错，但可能因太过匆忙而导致部分单词拼写错误，已经做了更改并以括号标出。

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Answer 2

我帮你改了一下，因为有写错的地方
Everyone has his own colorful dream ,as we know our dream can not only provide us with great power and confidence , but also make us stronger and stronger ,as well as influencing our attitude of life.
i've always had a dream , that is to become an english teacher , because i think being a teacher is one of most interesting things in the world,and it will be great fun to have classes with the children. Can you imagine how great it will be that you can practice your english easily when you teach children,you can also tell some amusing stories or funny jokes in english to make them laught in class?then the children must love classes in such a wonderful atmosphere ,and get more and more interested in learning english in shch an impressive class.they will learn lots of knowledge and love english very much just like me .
i know ,it is not easy to become a teacher, so i must learn more to make myself excellent and patient.
last but not least, all our dream will come true if we have courage to achieve them.

Answer 3

Everyone has his own beautiful dream .As we know, our dream can not only provide us with great power and confidence , but also make us become stronger and stronger .The most important thing is that they can influence our attitude for life.
I've always had a dream that is to become an English teacher. Because I think being a teacher is one of the most interesting things in the world.It will be the great fun to have classes with the children. Can you imagine how great it will be if you can practice your English easily when you teach your children.You can also tell the children some amusing stories or funny jokes in English to make them laugh in class.Then the children are certain to love the wonderful atmosphere of the class and get more and more interested in learning English in shch an impressive class.They will learn lots of knowledge and love English very much just like me .
I know it is not easy to become a teacher.So I must learn more to make myself excellent and patient. As a result, I have made a dicision to work hard from now on to make my dream come true. First of all, I will listen to my teacher in class and finish my homework in time afer class. Besides, I will make full use of the internet to practise my listening and speaking abilities. What's more, I will read some books and newspapers in English to improve my reading ablity.In addition, I should also keep a habit of writing a diary everyday and ask my teacher for help to correct my mistakes in order to improve my writing ability.
Last but not the least, all our dreams can come true if we have enough courage to achieve and work hard for them until we succeed.