求英语翻译，一段自我介绍。高分高分高分！

Question

我叫XXX，老家在XXX。XXX年XX月毕业于XXX。大学四年级时。我曾在留学咨询有限公司工作了一年。主要负责留学材料的翻译。毕业以后，八月来到了XX。在XXX公司就职。两份工作培养了我认真细心的工作态度。我的优点是做事积极，缺点是有些急性子。但随着工作经验的积累，已经渐渐改正。我的爱好是羽毛球等。如果能进入贵公司，我会努力工作。发挥自己的能力。
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Answer 1

I'm XXX, I'm from XXX. 2010 July graduated from the Liaoning Normal University. The fourth grade at university, I worked in consulting on the study abroad Company Limited has been working for a year. Mainly responsible for foreign materials translation. After graduation in August, came to dalian. In Dalian XXX limited company. Is mainly responsible for the work related to the BPO. Two job training my careful work attitude. My advantage is actively working, weakness is that some of the acute. But with the working experience, have gradually correct. My hobby is playing badminton. If can enter your company, I will work hard. Their ability to play.

Answer 2

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