1. have改为 had
2. woman改为 man
3. but删去。
4, the（long time）改为 a （long time）
5. shoulders 改为 shoulder
6. taking 改为 taken 解释：be taken by surprise 毫无准备……被吓一跳
7. 在was 和 my friend 之间加 not
8. terrible 改为 terribly
9. why 改为 how
10. at 改为 in
2. woman改为 man
3. but删去。
4, the（long time）改为 a （long time）
5. shoulders 改为 shoulder
6. taking 改为 taken 解释：be taken by surprise 毫无准备……被吓一跳
7. 在was 和 my friend 之间加 not
8. terrible 改为 terribly
9. why 改为 how
10. at 改为 in
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第1个回答 推荐于2016-10-05
one late afternoon ,on my way school ,I saw a strange man with a pair of dark glasses standing besides a house when I went by a street corner.I sensed anything wrong so I hid myself by a tree to see what would happen to him.After a while.the man looked about and find no one around. he kicked the door of the house openly and came into it.lmmediately I relized that I should call the police.five minutes later,the old police car came and two policeman got off.I hurried over into the house and soon after the man was caught.seeing this, I felt happy and hurried home.
one late afternoon ,on my way【加to) school ,I saw a strange man with a pair of dark glasses standing besides【改为beside) a house when I went by a street corner.I sensed anything【改为something) wrong so I hid myself by a tree to see what would happen to him.After a while.the man looked about and find【改为found) no one around. he kicked the door of the house openly【改为open) and came into it.lmmediately I relized(realized) that I should call the police.five minutes later,the【改为an) old police car came and two policeman【改为policemen) got off.I【改为They) hurried over【去掉over) into the house and soon after【去掉after) the man was caught.seeing this, I felt happy and hurried home.
one late afternoon ,on my way【加to) school ,I saw a strange man with a pair of dark glasses standing besides【改为beside) a house when I went by a street corner.I sensed anything【改为something) wrong so I hid myself by a tree to see what would happen to him.After a while.the man looked about and find【改为found) no one around. he kicked the door of the house openly【改为open) and came into it.lmmediately I relized(realized) that I should call the police.five minutes later,the【改为an) old police car came and two policeman【改为policemen) got off.I【改为They) hurried over【去掉over) into the house and soon after【去掉after) the man was caught.seeing this, I felt happy and hurried home.
第2个回答 2015-07-07
第一行have---had；woman---man
第二行去掉Though；whom---who
第三行for the---for a；shoulders---shoulder
第四行taking---taken；he was---he was not
第五行terrible---terribly；why---how
第二行去掉Though；whom---who
第三行for the---for a；shoulders---shoulder
第四行taking---taken；he was---he was not
第五行terrible---terribly；why---how
第3个回答 2015-07-07
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本回答被提问者采纳第4个回答 2015-07-07
不会
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