My Summer Vacation
Time flies. My happy primary school life has just ended. I visited Beijing, a well-known modern city with a long history. We all know that The Emperor(皇帝) of China lived in the Forbidden City(紫禁城)many years ago. In consequence(因此),as soon as I had stepped(过去完成时表示这个动作先发生) into the City, I immediately(马上)felt a strong atmosphere of luxury(奢华的气氛). The guide led us to visit every palace(宫殿)in the City and I was shocked(被震惊)by the fantastic view in front of my eyes. I have a very happy summer vacation.
As for(至于) my coming(即将到来的) middle school life, I always say to myself that I have to study hard. As the old saying goes well, 'Attitude is everything.' (正如一句名言所说,态度决定一切)
这是我纯原创的哦。。也许有些地方还欠妥。希望对你有所帮助。
追问虽然很不错,但是我真的住在北京,去过不止一趟故宫,但是谢谢你