帮我修改一下英语作文,用一般将来时。

my winter holiday
My winter holiday is very happy and unforgettable.I skate and make a snowman with my father and my friends.I often stay at home and did my school work.Sometimes I help my mother do housework and watch TV.I hope everybody in the new year happy.

My winter holiday
My winter holiday was very happy and unforgettable.I skated and made a snowman with my father and my friends.I often stayed at home and did my housework.Sometimes I helped my mother doing housework and watched TV.I hope that everybody will be happy in the new year .
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第1个回答  2014-02-13
你这个得用一般过去式。
My winter holiday was very happy and unforgettable.I skated and made a snowman with my father and my friends.I often stayed at home and did my school work.Sometimes I helped my mother do housework or watched TV.I hope everybody had a happy new year.
希望采纳哦~~
第2个回答  2014-02-13
I am loooking forward the winter holiday. I will make a snowman with my friend and skate on snow if we get enough snow. I will take some time stay at home to do my homework and wathc TV. I am also going to help my mom to do some housework in the holiday. I hope everybody have a great holiday.
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