第1个回答 2019-06-17
It
is
bad
to
us
to
go
after
famous
stars.
追星是有害的
First
it
is
a
waste
of
time,you
spend
your
youth
time
to
collect
star's
pictures
so
that
you
have
no
time
to
do
you
homework
or
study.
首先，追求偶像很浪费时间，你会花费你的青春年华去收集明星照片，于是很少有时间去顾你的学习或作业
Sencond
it
is
also
a
waste
of
money
to
you
as
you
must
spend
manymoney
to
take
part
in
all
kinds
of
parties
of
the
stars,that
need
a
lot
of
money.
追求明星也很耗金钱，因为你崇拜偶像你会去参加他们的各种演唱会，那都是需要很多钱的
Then
you
almost
have
no
time
and
feeling
to
communicate
with
you
friends,so
it
is
bad
to
your
relations
with
your
friends.
第2个回答 2020-03-03
Today，I'd
like
to
tell
you
something
about
my
favourite
star
called
SHINee.Maybe
you
are
not
familiar
with
them
even
have
difficulty
figuring
out
what
their
name
means.Don't
worry,just
listen.
Their
name
SHINee,which
comes
from
the
word
"shine",is
not
a
formal
English
word.By
adding
an
"e"
,however,SHINee
means
those
who
shines
the
world.I'm
a
SHINee
world,which
stands
for
their
loyal
fans.I
enjoy
their
songs
as
well
as
their
fasinating
dance.Also,the
korean
singing
group
is
well-known
all
over
the
world.Additionally
their
handsome
appearance
and
optimistic
image
undoubtedly
adds
up
to
thier
fame
worldwide.
Now
I'll
give
you
a
brief
introduction
on
SHINee.Leading
by
Onew,SHINee
has
5
menbers.They
are
Onew,Minho,Key,Taemin
and
Bling,each
of
who
is
really
young.So
they
may
be
a
pioneer
of
those
born
in
the
1990s.
Too
much
for
those
above.And
now,I
have
an
exciting
news
for
all
of
you
that
they've
just
launched
their
3rd
Mini
Album,2009
Year
Of
Us
and
their
2nd
Mini
Album
has
recently
come
onto
the
Chinese
market.So
provided
that
you
are
interested
in
it,just
go
to
the
video
shop
to
buy
it.I'm
sure
you
will
never
regret
doing
so
for
their
song
is
so
attractive.
Now
anyone
have
any
questions?I'm
here
to
give
you
some
detail
infomation. PS:是SHINee的..
第3个回答 2020-05-14
第一段说明讨论的话题；第二段正反观点：第三段总结。
给一个参考：
My
idol
My
idol
is
Leehom
Wang（王力宏）.He
is
a
talent
singer.He
can
play
many
instrument.For
example,he
can
play
the
piano,the
violin,the
guitar
and
so
on.
Also,his
songs
are
very
good!Such
as
"Forever
love","Only
one","Mary
says","the
small
love
in
big
city","Kiss
goodbye"and
so
on.
And
he
also
writes
the
songs
by
himself,especially
the
original
lyrics.
So
many
people
like
him
very
much.
Now,he
concentrates
on
the
Chinese
music
.
Of
course,he
is
very
handsome.He
also
have
the
high
academic
records.
He
has
many
advantage,too.He
is
a
kind
man,he
is
hardly
ever
angry
with
other
people.
So
many
singers
or
actors
are
his
friends.When
he
is
making
his
CD,he
even
forgets
the
time
and
the
meals.He
is
very
earnest
and
gentle.I
really
take
pride
in
his
fans!
我的偶像
我的偶像是王力宏.他是人才歌手.他能演奏许多歌曲.例如，他会弹钢琴，小提琴，吉他等。此外，他的歌都很不错！如“永远的爱”，“唯一”，“玛丽说，”“，在大城小爱”，“吻别”等。他还写了自己的歌曲，尤其是原来的歌词。因此，许多人很喜欢他。现在，他专注于中国音乐。当然，他很英俊也有较高的学术记录。他也有许多优点。他是一个善良的人，他很少与其他人生气。这么多的歌手或演员是他的友谊友谊，他正在他的CD，他甚至忘记了时间.他是非常认真，.我真正把他的球迷的骄傲！
先列提纲。再进行扩充。
其实英文作文和语文写作是同样模式的。
一般来说，对任何话题的议论文都可以这样简单展开。
1.是什么what
is
it
?
2.为什么why
?
3.怎么做what
can
we
do/what
do
we
think?
4.会怎样the
effect.
把话题融入这四方面来写就可以了。
记住，在写作的同时，加入一些名言和实例能让文章看起来更有可读性。尽量多运用长句和复杂句，太多的简单句和短句会让人觉得是小学生写的英文作文。另外，文章里面增加一些俚语和短语词组搭配，能让文章更出彩。
在第3点(怎么做)这个里面，可以正面说明这么做了会怎样，更可以再反面说明一下不这么做会怎样。
运用了这些方法，应该说，你可以写一篇还不错的文章了。
记住哈，英文作文的立意永远是最重要的。表达好自己的看法很重要。
第4个回答 2020-01-09
Yao
Ming
is
my
favourite
sports
star.He
is
tall
and
his
baskectball
skill
is
wonderful.As
a
sports
star,he
is
working
hard
and
try
his
best
to
do
well
in
basketball.This
is
worth
learning
for
me,so
i
always
study
hard.All
in
all,Yao
Ming
is
a
great
star
and
I
like
him
very
much!