英语翻译，一篇故事

Question

请专业人士是帮帮忙，谢谢，一片小故事
很久以前有一个女孩子，她出生在中国的一个小城市里。她来到这个世界上的一个月后就被父母带到了另外一个不熟悉但是很发达的大城市，上海。小城只在那个女孩子脑海中留下了一个很模糊很朦胧的印象，然而女孩子认为只有那里才是她真正的家。女孩子从小就很少与父母见面，妈妈为了追求自己的理想而去了英国，爸爸又因为常年出差而不在家。没有父母在身旁的女孩想要从朋友的身上的到安慰然而朋友的背叛和戏弄终于让女孩明白只能相信自己。女孩身边最亲的人是父母花钱请来的家庭教师，女孩不可以依靠任何人除了自己，女孩很努力很努力地学着自己照顾自己，学会晚上一个人呆在没有其他人的漆黑空旷的屋子里，学会自己为自己做饭洗衣，学会自己一个人过生日，学会一个人回家，学会适应一个人的生活… …
女孩13岁时，被母亲送到了韩国，那里离自己的家好远，女孩不想要离开自己的家。她用尽了办法想要改变母亲的想法，她努力学习想要证明在家里一样可以很优秀，她努力照顾自己证明在家里她才可以过得更好，她努力听从父母的话做他们想要她做的事，她一直都好努力好努力，然而却始终改变不了已经被决定的命运… …
在韩国的4年里，女孩渐渐适应了异国他乡的生活，她拥有了不少的朋友，她试着成为乖孩子，她尝试着改变自己，为的是希望可以得到别人的关心，然而并没有，看着好朋友偎依在自己父母身边享受着来自亲人的爱，女孩发现她还是没有变，她仍和以前一样孤独。为了不让孤独再影响女孩子，她试着让自己变得更坚强，她学跆拳道，她拥有短发，她做尽一切男孩子可以做的事，除了拥有一个女朋友。曾经有一个男孩子看穿了女孩子内心的脆弱，想要保护她，女孩子第一次哭了，痛快淋漓得哭，她好高兴终于有一个人会关心他，只是因为她是他爱的人，而不是因为其他。
当女孩16岁时，很少见面的母亲出现在女孩的面前，女孩没有太多的惊喜就被母亲的话语所震惊，女孩要被送往澳洲上大学。连说不要的机会都没有，女孩对着录取通知书笑出了眼泪，只是心在滴血。女孩没有告诉男孩所有的一切，想尽办法隐瞒。可是终于，男孩看出了女孩的心事，他希望女孩说出来，女孩选择了沉默。几天以后，男孩提出了分手原因却是因为女孩长年封闭的心让他死了心，他走不进去所以选择放弃。没有埋怨没有哭泣，女孩只是说：“你值得更好的女孩，放弃我是对的选择。”
女孩来到另一个陌生的国家，继续着一个人的生活，有一天她在网上遇见了一个当地的男孩子，他给了她很多的关心和帮助，女孩曾经不肯相信他，也想过不要再理他，然而每次上网都能看到他的问候，让女孩渐渐变得贪心起来。他鼓励女孩子追求自己想要的人生，追求自己渴求的梦想，他教会女孩子开始对生活有了不曾有的乐观。
拜托，我要真人翻译好不好，能有哪位可以抽空帮一下忙，不要在线翻译，翻译的太恶心了......

Answer 1

难倒是不难，不过挺长的，本人花了差不多一个小时翻译。不少地方采取意译的方法，本人澳籍华人，自信英文行文比较地道：

Long time ago, there was a girl who was born in a small city in China. One month after she was broght to the world, her parents took her to a unfamiliar but well-developed big city, Shanghai. The small city just left a blurry and misty impression on the girl, however, she only considered that was her real home.

Since young, she seldom met her parents. The mother had gone to the U.K. for her aspiration, while the father was always not home because of constant business trips. Without the parents by her side, the girl wished to get comfort from her friends. However, her friends' betrayal and teasing made her understand that there was only herself could be trusted. The most affectionate person was a tutor hired by her parents. The girl could not rely on anybody but herself, and she tried her best to learn to take care of herself. She had learned to stay in a dark and empty house only by herself, she had learned to cook and wash for herself, and she had learned to celebrate her birthday alone, walk back home alone, live alone....

When she was 13, her mother sent her to Korea, where is very far from her home. The girl didn't want to leave the home, therefore, she tried any possible ways to persuade her mother to change the mind. She studied hard, trying to prove that she could be very smart even she stayed at home. She tried to taked good care of herself, trying to prove that she would live better only at home. She tried to follow the parents' words and do what they expected her to do. She had been trying and trying, but the fate could not be changed.....

After 4 years in Korea, the girl became used to the living in a foreign country. She had a few friends. She tried to be a good child and change herself, hoping to attract cares from the others, however she failed. Looking at friends in the cuddle of their parents enjoying the love from the loved ones, she found that nothing had been changed and she was lonely as before. In order to get rid of the loneliness, the girl tried to become stronger and she learned Taekwondo. She had short hair and she did everything boys could do, except for a girlfriend.

A boy, had seen through the weakness inside her, told her that he wanted to protect her. The girl cried, for the first time, she bursted into a big cry. She was so happy finally there was one person who cared about her, only because she was what he loved but not any other reason.

When the girl was 16, the mother, whom she seldom met, showed up before her. Shortly after she was in joy to see her mother again, she was shocked by her decision to send her to Australia to study in a college. She even didn't have a chance to say no. Looking at the enrollment leter, she cried in tears and her heart was bleeding. The girl didn't tell the boy everything and tried to hide this from him. However, the boy saw through this one day and hoped she could tell him, but she remained silent. A few days later, the boy said he wanted a break up, as the long time close up of the girl's heart made him to give up. He could not go on so he chose to give up. There was no compliant and there was no cry. The girl only said, "You worth a better girl, it is a right choice to give me up."

The girl reached another country that was strange to her and continue the life alone. One day, on Internet, she met a local boy, who had given her a lot of care and help. At the beginning, the girl was not willing to believe in him, and she had ever considered to not pay any attention to him. However, every time she was online, she got his greetings, and this made her became greedy. He encouraged her to pursue the life she really wanted, and pursue the dream she was longing for. He had enabled the girl to be optimistic of life for the first time of her life.

Answer 2

下面事GOOGLE翻译的结果，里面有不通顺的你自己整理一下

A long time ago to have a girl, she was born in a small Chinese city. She came to this world by their parents after one month to another but are not familiar with well-developed city, Shanghai. Small town girl in mind was a very dim fuzzy impression, however, that the only girl there, she is truly home. Little girls from an early age with their parents to meet her mother in order to pursue their own ideals of the British left, and because her father at home rather than travel all the year round. Parents do not want girls in the side of the body from a friend of a friend but to comfort and betrayal fun of finally understand that girls can only trust themselves. Girls who are the most pro-parent families were invited to pay teachers, girls can not rely on anyone apart from themselves, girls are working very hard to learn to take care of themselves, learning to stay one night there are no other black person's open house , The Institute for their own laundry cooking, learning a person's own birthday, a society for people to go home and learn to adapt to a person's life ... ...
13-year-old girl, the mother was sent to Korea, from where his home is far better, the girls do not want to leave their home. She wants to change the way he used up all his mother's idea, she wanted to study hard to prove in the home can be excellent, her efforts to take care of themselves at home to prove she can lead a better, to listen to her parents if they want to do her To do, she has always been good to better, but still can not change the decision has been the fate of the ... ...
In South Korea four years, the girls gradually adapt to the foreign country's life, she has a lot of friends, she tried to become a good boy, she try to change themselves, but for the hope that other people can be concerned, however, did not And watched a good friend of nestling in their parents enjoyed the love from family members, she found that girls still have not changed, and she was lonely as before. In order to prevent further affect the lonely girl, she tried to let themselves become stronger, she was learning taekwondo, she has short hair, she did do everything boys can do, in addition to having a girlfriend. There was a boy to see through the girl's fragile heart, wanted to protect her, the girl cried for the first time, Tongkuailinli was crying, she was happy to finally have a good one will be concerned about him, just because she is the love of his people, and Not because of the other.
When the 16-year-old girl, the mother rarely appears in front of girls, girls do not have much to the surprise of the mother was shocked by the words, the girls were sent to Australia to go to college. Do not even say that the opportunities are not taking notice of girls at the tears Xiaochu, the only drop of blood in the heart. Boys and girls did not tell everything, tried their best to conceal. But finally, the boy saw the girl's mind, and he hoped that the girls, girls opted for silence. A few days later, the boy raised the breakup of the reasons is because the girl closed the hearts of so many years he was dead heart, he does not take into account and therefore he chose to give up. Do not complain about not crying, just for girls: "You deserve better girl, I give up the right to choose."
Another girl came to an unfamiliar country, to continue with a person's life, one day she met on the Internet a local boy, he gave her a lot of care and help girls who refuse to believe that he also thought not to Him again, but every time the Internet can see his greetings to allow girls to be getting out of greed. He wants to encourage girls to pursue their own life, and to pursue their long-cherished dream of his life to the church to start the girls did not have some optimism.

Answer 3

Have a girl long time ago, she be born in a small city of Chinese li. She is taken to have arrived at the besides one not knowing well that but very developed big city , Shanghai right away by parents after arriving in this a moon of in the world. The small town has left a very blurred very dim impression only in that girl mind, but the girl has thought that she is real only when there are really. The girl from childhood right away seldom meets with parents , mother have gone to United Kingdom to run after self ideal , father is out because of the average year is on a business trip. Without parents, the other girl wants to comfort from friend's on one's body arriving at but friend's betraying draws being kidded finally make the girl clearly in the body to be able to only believe in self. The closest people is that parents spends money inviting a tutor to come girl at one's side , the girl can not depend on anybody except self , the girl makes great efforts to make great efforts very much very much geonomy let self look after self, institute one people in the evening stays not other, learn self washing clothes for self cooks meal , learn self one people celebrating the birthday , learn one people going home in people's spacious jet-black room,learn to adapt to one personal life, ... The girl has been delivered to Korea Republic when being 13-year-old, by the mother, there be good far away from self family , the girl does not want to leave self family. She has exhausted way wanting to change mother's idea , her work hard can be very excellent like wanting to testify be in home , she has made great efforts to give consideration to self certificate can live with much better in her home talent , she has made great efforts to obey parents's words acting as them wanting the thing that she does , she has been fond of making great efforts to be fond of making great efforts always all , has changed but the destiny being decided without end already all the time, ... In Korea Republic's lining for 4 years, the girl has been adapting to foreign country alien land life gradually , she has been owning no few friends , she has been trying becoming the lovely child , she has been attempting to change self , the hope for being can get others's regard, but joining not to look at the love let good friend snuggle up to coming from a relative being enjoying by self parents, the girl discovers her still , finclause she is still as lonely as previously. For not dodging to affect a girl lonely again, she is trying let self become firmer , she is learning Taekwondo , she is owning a bob, she acts as the as all as possible boy not bad thing composing, except owning a girlfriend. Once, there was a boy having seen through inward fragility of girl , wanted to protect her , the girl having cried for the first time , was so direct in dealings as to cry, she is easy to be glad to there is one people may care for him finally , is only fault because of she is the people that he loves, because of other. When pawning girl 16-year-old, very few the mothers who meet appears before the girl, not very many pleasantly surprised of girl is shaken by mother's utterance right away , the girl wants to be given to study in university to Australia. Do not have including saying the chance no essential points, the girl has laughed at out a tear to adimission notice, in however the heart dripping blood. The girl does not inform a boy of all all , go out of one's way conceal. The boy has finally, perceived but girl's load on slef's mind , he has hoped that the girl speaks out , the girl has been chosen keeping silent. Several day the boy has suggested that cause is that the heart has let him drop the idea forever because of the girl is all the year round enclosed but hereafter, separating with each other , he has walked not going in therefore choosing give up. Do not complain that not weeping, the girl says only: "Girl that you are worth it more well, abandoning me is pair of choice ". The girl arrives in another strange country, life being continuing one people, she had come across a local boy on the net one day , he had given her much's regard and help , the girl had once been unwilling to believe in him , had also had wanted not to pay attention to him again, to get on the Internet all can see his ragards but every time , let a girl become avaricious gradually getting up. He encourages a girl to run after the life that self wants , run after the fond dream that self is eager about, his church girl begins to have had never some optimisms to life.

Answer 4

Very long before has a girl, she is born in a China's small town city. She arrives in this world one month later is brought by the parents to other one not familiar, but very developed big city, Shanghai. The small town has only made a very fuzzy very dim impression in that girl mind, however the girl thinks only then there is her genuine family. The girl are very since childhood few with the parents meets, mother to pursue her ideal to go to Britain, daddy because year to year travelled on official business is not at the home. Does not have the parents however, in the one's side girl wants from friend's body friend's betrayal and plays tricks on to the comfort lets the girl understand that finally can only believe itself. Girl side most own person is the tutor who the parents spend invite, the girl may not depend upon anybody except oneself, the girl studies to look after itself very diligently very diligently, the academic society evening a person stays in not in the other person's jet black spacious room, learns itself to prepare food for oneself washes clothes, learns itself to celebrate a birthday, learns a person to go home, the academic society adapts person's life…
When girl 13 years old, has been delivered South Korea by the mother, there to own family good far, the girl does not want to leave her family. She exhausted the means to want to change mother's idea, she studied diligently wants the certificate at home equally to be possible to be very outstanding, she looked after herself to prove that diligently at home she only then might cross well, she obeyed the matter which diligently parents' words were them to want her to do, her continuously good diligently good endeavor, however actually throughout could not change already destiny… which decided
In South Korea's 4 years, the girl adapted Yiguota Town's life gradually, she had many friends, she tries to become the clever child, she attempts is changing herself, what for is the hope may obtain others' care, however, has not looked that the good friend snuggles up to own parents side enjoys from family member's love, the girl was discovering she has not changed, she still with before is equally lonely. For does not let lonely affect the girl again, she is trying becomes by herself stronger, she studies the Tae Kwon Do, she has the short hair, she does the matter which all boys may do, except has a girlfriend. Once some boy saw through the girl innermost feelings frailty, the wish has protected her, the girl first time has cried, is happily dripping cries, she quite happy will have a person to care about him finally, only will be because she will be the human who he will love, but will not be because of other.
When girl 16 years old, the very rare surface's mother appears too many in girl's front, the girl pleasantly surprised has not been shocked by mother's words, the girl must escort to Australia to go to college. Including said does not want the opportunity does not have, the girl treated the admission notice to smile the tear, was only the heart in the drop blood. The girl has not told the boy all, does everything possible to conceal. But finally, the boy saw girl's concern, he hopes the girl saying that the girl has chosen the silence. Several days later, the boy proposed bids good-bye the reason is actually because the girl elder seals up the heart lets him lose heart, he cannot walk, therefore the choice gives up. The complaint has not sobbed, the girl was only said: “you are worth a better girl, gives up me is the right choice.”
The girl arrives at another strange country, is continuing a person's life, one day of she on-line met a local boy, he has given her many cares and the help, the girl once was not willing to believe him, also had thought do not manage him again, however each time accesses the net to be able to see his regards, let the girl become gradually greedy. He encourages the life which the girl pursues herself to want, pursues dream which one earnestly seek, he taught the girl to start to have some to the life to be not once optimistic.