英语自我介绍(高分请求翻译.)

Question

大家好,我叫...今年16岁了,我是个男孩我来自广西.广西的山水很美.我很喜欢.
我喜欢睡觉,打游戏和看书,还喜欢玩电脑.我喜欢打CS,我是个电子竞技玩家.
新学校,新同学,新老师.
转眼间我们已经在一起学习了一个多月了,我们一起上课,一起学习.
和大家在一起上课很开心.
在这里我们碰见了我们的英语老师ROBINSON.
他是一位很好很棒的老师,课上得很好,英语很标准.
我有一个快乐的家庭和一对和蔼的父母.我爱他们,他们也很爱我.
在21世纪,英语是非常重要的.将来,当我们踏入社会,英语就会变得非常有用.
我们需要学好英语,这不仅需要ROBINSON的帮助,也需要我们自己努力.
我相信我们能做好.谢谢.

顺便帮忙想下我的英文名,我叫林文逸

Answer 1

楼上的不是很好。看我的！
Hello,everyone!my name is Lin Wenyi.I come from Guangxi province,and i like the beautiful scenery of there.My hobbies are sleep reading, play games especially CS.I'a eletronical competist.new school,classmates and teachers.Time flows so fast,we had studies for one month more .we had classes and learned together,we are all happy to have classes together.Here i met our Eglish teacher,ROBINSON.He is a good teacher,his classes are so good and his english is very good.i hace a happy family,easygoing parents,we love each other.In 21th century,english is very important.when we will step into the society ,it will become very useful.we need to learn english well,it needs not only the help of ROBINSON,but also our efforts.i believe we can do it well.Thanks

Answer 2

Hello, My name is Lin Wenyi, a 16-year-old this year, I was a boy I come from Guangxi. Guangxi's beautiful landscape. I like.
I like to sleep, play games and read books, play like a computer. I like to play CS, I am an E-sport players.
New schools, new students, new teachers.
Blink of an eye, we have to learn together for more than a month, we have classes together, learning together.
And we are very happy with the school.
Here we met our English teacher ROBINSON.
He is a very good teacher, class very well, very English standard.
I have a happy family and a pair of nice parents. I love them, they love me.
In the 21st century, English is very important. In the future, as we enter the society, English would be very useful.
We need to learn English, which not only help ROBINSON, but also our own efforts.
I believe we can do a good job. Thank you.

Answer 3

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Answer 4

电子竞技仅限于 CS？“信、达、雅”中的“信”首先就没达到。