写作思路:文章要求的意思是写自己最崇拜的女人,那么就可以写最崇拜自己的妈妈。
正文:
The woman I admire most is my kind mother.
我最崇拜的女人是我和蔼可亲的妈妈。
Because she has a kind heart. I remember once, my mother and I went
shopping and saw a lovely dog on the road. Although it's cute, it's
dirty. I think it's too dirty, so I'm going to kick it and let it leave.
因为她有一颗善良的心。记得一次,我和妈妈去买菜,在马路上看见了一只可爱的小狗。虽然它很可爱但是却很脏,我嫌它太脏便准备踢它一脚,让它离开。
But
my mother stopped me and said to me sternly, "love the dog. You can't
kick it. Look how poor it is. Give her something to eat. It must have
been hungry for days. "
谁知妈妈却阻止了我,严厉地对我说:“对小狗要有爱心,你可不能踢它,瞧它多可怜呀。给她一些吃的吧,它肯定饿了几天了。”
I said disapprovingly, "isn't it just a puppy? be necessary? Let's go!
我不以为然地说:“不就是一只小狗嘛?有必要?我们还是快走吧!”
"No,
Yan, you know, everyone should have a good conscience. No matter how
dirty it is, it will be happy as long as someone comforts it. Come and
buy some food! " Mom patted me on the shoulder.
“不行,岩呀,你要知道,每个人都要有一颗善良心,它不管有多脏,只要有人安慰它,它就会很高兴的。来去买点吃的吧!”妈妈拍拍我的肩膀。
This time, she taught me a lesson. My mother told me that people should have a kind heart.
这一次,她给我上了一课,是妈妈告诉我人要有一颗善良的心。
这是多少字的?从网上搜的还是自己写的?网上搜的我用不了
追答自己截啊
追问我要120-180字的
追答差不多
120
追问这是从网上截的么?只要是网上的我都用不了
追答哦,那好,那其他人的材料吧
网上自己看有没有
追问你这是从哪截的?百度上的文章我都是不能用的
追答网易呢
追问都不行,因为文章是要交到句酷批改网的
本回答被提问者和网友采纳不会能不能别在这干扰