英语生日邀请函怎么写

Question

亲爱的马术则
我要十一岁了，
3月27日来我家
我有一个生日聚会
希望你来我家
孟春

好了加分
20分钟内

Answer 1

Dear Shuze Ma

I'm turning 11 and there's a birthday party in my place on 27th of March.
I hope you can come.
Looking forward to see you there.

Cheers
Chun Meng

放心，肯定准确。我现在在海外就是party 筹办者。
Looking forward to see you there.是‘期待你的到来’的意思。
你可以决定加不加这句。

@_@

Answer 2

Dear Ma Shuze,
March 27th will be my eleventh birthday and we will have a birthday party. I hope you can come to my party and we will surely have a good time.
Meng Chun

P.S.最后一句后半句是客套用语，加上去显得通顺一些。

Answer 3

dear
***,
i'd
like
to
invite
you
to
join
in
my
birthday
party
at
6p.m.,
june
19th,
2014.
yours,
tom