急求英语作文100字左右

Question

最近，一英语学习网站就网站的使用性问题向用户征求改进意见。假定你是李华，请根据下列内容将你发现的问题和如何改进的建议以电子邮件的形式提交给该网站。
1.使用该网站过程中发现了一些问题
2.部分图片不能完整显示，内容更新不及时
3.建议尽快改进以便更好的服务广大英语学者

开头：
Dear Sir,
As a user of your website,I like it very much.

Answer 1

Dear Sir,
As a user of your website,I like it very much. But I have to tell you that I found some problems while I am visiting your website. Fist,some pictures can not be seen completely.Also,the information is not update in time. In order to give the English learners a better survice, I hope you can improve the website.
Thank you very much!

Sincerely,
XXX

楼上的文采很好..敬佩~
But no offence,
The learning methods that are used by your website really efficient和some information do not being updated in time.这两个句子的谓语动词在哪里呢？而且前一个句子的从句也有问题吧...你的网站所使用的英语学习方法?是人使用还是网站使用啊...后者do not应该改为is吧?
如果是我有什么理解错的地方请指教..呵呵

Answer 2

Dear Sir,
As a user of your website,I like it very much.And I believe that other users are content with it when they are learning English on your website.However,I find that something is wrong with your website when I use it.
First of all,parts of the pictures can not display completely.Besides,the content of the website can not be updated in time.
Therefore,I have made some advice for you that you should improve your website as soon as possible so that you can offer better services for the widely distributed English learners.
Thanks a lot.
Yours sincerely
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希望能帮上你喔！！！

Answer 3

Dear Sir,
As a user of your website,I like it very much. The learning methods that are used by your website really efficient and I have improved a lot in my English.
However, I have found some problems while using the website. Firstly, some pictures cannot be shown completely. Besides, some information do not being updated in time. The news that are being shown are often out of date.
Therefore, I hope that you can improve your website as soon as possible in order to give all English learners a better service.
Thank you very much.

Your sincerely,
xxx