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In (加入the) autumn of 1985,when I was a young man,I was traveling in the north of India.(One) evening,after (hunting) in the forest all day,I was returning to the place (where) I had put up my tent.It was getting dark,(and) I was walking along a road.Suddenly I saw two eye glaring at me from (between) the trees.What (could) I do?Should I jump into the river to save my life?Then I looked (to) the right.In the river there (was) a big crocodile waiting to welcome me with its mouth (去掉was) wide open.
另：save my live应该是save my life的错打
In (加入the) autumn of 1985,when I was a young man,I was traveling in the north of India.(One) evening,after (hunting) in the forest all day,I was returning to the place (where) I had put up my tent.It was getting dark,(and) I was walking along a road.Suddenly I saw two eye glaring at me from (between) the trees.What (could) I do?Should I jump into the river to save my life?Then I looked (to) the right.In the river there (was) a big crocodile waiting to welcome me with its mouth (去掉was) wide open.
另：save my live应该是save my life的错打
第2个回答 2015-03-01
his--her
on phone--on a/the phone
loud--louder
leave--leaving
去掉was后的that
seems--seemed
but--and
student--students
immediate--immediately
down--off本回答被提问者和网友采纳
on phone--on a/the phone
loud--louder
leave--leaving
去掉was后的that
seems--seemed
but--and
student--students
immediate--immediately
down--off本回答被提问者和网友采纳
第3个回答 2015-03-01
第一句有错 但是我不明白这句话到底想说什么
第4个回答 2015-03-01
不会
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