改错原文:
①Two months ago, I went to abroad for further study. ②Before I left, I was given a lot of present. ③Among the presents, there were two presents which were really interested me. ④My sister buys me a book with color pictures about body language and with words about customs of different countries in them. ⑤My brother gave me a note, which read, "My present has put in you bedroom." ⑥When I hurriedly into my bedroom, I found a box, in that there was an electronic dictionary. ⑦I was very glad but a few surprised to receive these two presents.
1 第②句里,Before引导的时间状语从句和后面的主句不是有先后顺序的么,为什么不用考虑过去完成时?
2 第④句里,color pictures是可以表示彩色图片而不需要用colorful么?
3 第⑥句里,in that这里,答案说是把that换成which,这个我懂。但是我想把in that当做地点状语提前,而把指代that改成this,这种改法可以么?
求英语大神解答,说一下原因,谢谢啦!
I went to abroad ,to去掉
a lot of presents
which were really interested me,were去掉
bought me a book
has been put in your bedroom
in which there was
a little surprised
前后顺序只适用于after/since,before这里不太符合,也没有必要,意思已经很完整
color名词可以活用成形容词性修饰BOOK,就好像名词family也可以说成family picture全家福照片
都不可以,因为已经有there了。
我有答案,一共10处错误,不过还是谢谢你哈!
1 before不适用于动作先后么?这个先后什么时候才能用,总是判断不好。
3 但是答案给的是In which啊,那there was an electronic dictionary in this. 这句话不对么?
这么晚了,感谢啊!
before也可以用的,看具体有没有意思、逻辑就好了,完成时的逻辑在于该动作要对现在或说话当时有影响,像你文中这句,没有强调影响,而是作为时间状语的普通陈述,看他作用偏向哪个。
there was an electronic dictionary in this. 这句话对,用THIS最好是THIS BOX
这么晚了,谢谢啊,辛苦了!
1 这个先后什么时候才能用,总是判断不好。
3 in和this不能连用?这个...没听说过啊。。。那“在这里”该如何表达呢?There was an electronic dictionary in this. 这句话不对么?
跟你讲一些in的搭配:in that 有因为 由于 既然 的意思,in this就只是“在这里面”的意思,in which是介词加关系代词。