帮我翻译几句英语 谢谢

1.introduction主题: 有必要学好英语
1)理由1:英语是世界通用语言
2)理由2:英语是使用范围最广的语言
3)理由3:学不好英语 找不到工作
2.body facts根据
1)理由1的根据:世界上60%的信件都是用英文来书写的
2)理由2的根据:有172个国家都用英语作为母语
3)理由3的根据:大多数公司都要求700分以上的托业成绩
3:conclusion结论
意见 和结论 2~3句话
可见英语真的很重要,所以我一定会好好听leving ston的课。为了以后能让我找到好工作,所以亲爱的leving ston给我个a吧!
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如果觉得 翻译的别扭可以适当帮我改以改 总之就是这么简单的几句话 4月13日之前 翻译出来的给分,,,谢谢,
1楼,反正也是用翻译机,怎么不把我分界线下面的话也一起翻译了,,,,,,,,

Outline
1 Instroduction
Theme It's necessary to have a good command of English
Reason 1
English is an international language.
Reason 2
English is the most wildly used language.
Reason 3
Without good English, no good job.

2 Body facts
Supporting facts for reason 1
60% of the letters in the world are written in English.
Supporting facts for reason 2
People in 172 countries use English as their first language
Supporting facts for reason 3
Most companys require candidates' TOEIC scores over 700.

3 Conclusion
Opinions and a conclusion in two or three sentences.
It's obvious that English is very important; therefore, I will be attentive in Leving Ston' class. Dear Leving Ston, please give me an A so that I can get a good job.

翻译注解:
1 学不好英语 找不到工作不要翻译成一般结构的句子,这样就体现不出这句“口号”的形式特点了。
2 有172个国家都用英语作为母语这句话是有问题的,国家没有的母语,人才有母语,所以翻译的时候,已经改正了。
3 好好听课不是listen well 而是be attentive in the class。

短文示例:
My topic today is that it's necessary to have a good command of English. We have studied English for several years and many of us wonder why we need to learn the language. After thinking throughly, I got three reasons.

First, English is an international language. When people have international conferences, English is used among people to communicate with each other. It's their "common" language. And when we want to make friends with foreign people who don't speak our language and whose language we don't understand, we can use English. We can talk in English; write in English. Do you that 60% of the letters in the world are written in English.
So English is an international language which we must learn well.

Second, English is the most wildly used language. Indeed,Chinese is the language which is widely used as a first language; however, English is the wildly used, because many countries use it as an official language such as Singarpoe.

Third, without good English, no good job. This is my slogan. It is a realistic factor for us to learn English well, especially in China. The factor is that most companys require candidates' TOEIC scores over 700. And many international companies begin their business in China; they need employees with good English. And English is much more seen as a tool than a language; therefore, having a good command of English is also a skill. I believe that without good English, no good job.

Finally, I want to say that it's obvious that English is very important; therefore, let's spend more time and effort on it. I promise that I will be attentive in Leving Ston' class and Dear Leving Ston, please give me an A so that I can get a good job.

That's all. Thank you so much!

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第1个回答  2010-04-11
Topic: The importance of learning English.

Introduction
Point 1: English is a global language
Point 2: English is the most widely spoken native language in the world.
point 3: Knowing English opens up the widest possible job and employment opportunities in many countries and markets.

Body
Supporting fact for point 1: There are more then 60% of writings written in English.
Supporting fact for point 2:There are approximate 172 countries which use English as their first language.
Supporting fact for point 3: Most companies require the candidates to scores above 700 in a TOEIC which is a test of English proficiency .

Conclusion
Obviously, learning English is extremely important.Therefore, I would willing to pay my full attention during leving ston's classes. In order to have better opportunity of getting a good job,so please, my dear leving ston, please give me an A.
第2个回答  2010-04-10
It's necessary to learning English well
English is the international language
English is the most widely used language
can't find a job if your english is not good
60% of letters in the world are written in englishi
There are 172 countries in the wrold which use English as their mother language
the requirement of most companies is that your TIEFL score is over 700 points
so we can see that english is very important and we should learn Leving Ston's class very well, as to getting a good job in future please give me an "A" my dear Leving Ston
第3个回答  2010-04-10
把分给我吧 我没用软件给你翻译 我是一个字母一个字母给你打的 放心 我翻译的没什么问题
1.The theme of introduction:it is necessary to learn English well

1) Reason 1: English is the international language

2) Reason 2: English is the most widely used language

3) Reason 3: Not to learn English well can not find work

2.The facts based on

1) Reason 1 is based on: 60% of the letters in the world are written in English

2) Reason 2 is based on: There are 172 countries having English as their mother language

3) Reason 3 is based on: Most companies require a TOEIC score which need to get over 700 points

3.Conclusion

Advices and conclusions 2 or 3 sentences

The reasons show that English is a very important language, so I must listen to Leving ston 's classse well. For the future a good job i can get , so my dear Leving ston, give me the A!

鄙视楼下抄袭我的 有个小错误我改了 你怎么没改??
第4个回答  2010-04-10
1.introduction theme: the need to learn English
1) Reason # 1: English is the international language
2) reason 2: English is the most widely used language
3) reason 3: learn English well can not find work
2.body facts under
1) The reason one is based: 60% of the world, the letters are written in English
2) the reasons for the under 2: There are 172 countries have English as their mother tongue
3) The reason 3, according to: Most companies require a TOEIC score over 700 points
3: conclusion Conclusion
Opinions and conclusions of the 2 ~ 3 sentences
Shows that English is very important, so I would surely listen to leving ston class. For the future let me find a good job, so dear leving ston give me a bar!
第5个回答  2010-04-10
Is there a need to subject to learn English well?
1)Reason 1: the world common language is English
2)reason 2: English is the most extensive use of language
3)Reason 3: to learn English well to find work
2 facts according to the body
1) reason 1: the world according to the letters are 60% in English writing
2 the reason 2) according to: 172 countries use English as their mother tongue
3) the three reasons: most companies according to the requirements of the industry more than 700
3: ought to conclusions
Opinions and conclusion
English is really important, so I will listen to leving ston's class. To find a good job can let me, so dear leving ston gave me a!!!! 如果是写作文的话,不是直接翻译就可以的