求此句中译英 翻译，谢谢！

Question

睡梦中的我刚刚被你唤醒，扬起的嘴角，那一定是个美好的梦。

Immersing in the dream,I have been awaken by you, raise the mouth, that must be a good dream.

这样翻译可以吗？

请求高手 给点其他翻译~谢谢了
别拿有道或者其他智能词典翻译来唬人，明显翻译与原句不一样。。。。

Answer 1

很好，有些词用的不错。但是最后一句是一个完整的句子，前面一定不能用逗号。
要将汉语几个小短句连成一句话，就要多用定语从句。
我的翻译如下：
Just roused from the sleep by you, I got a sly smile rested on my lips, which meant a sweet dream.

Answer 2

I had been dreaming of you awaken, raise the mouth, that must be a good dream.

Answer 3

可以这是很不错的了

Answer 4

I had been dreaming of you awaken, raise the mouth, that must be a good dream

Answer 5

恩 已经蛮准了 语句的顺序可以改一下
I've been woken up by U immersing in the dream.当然如果LZ想分开讲也可以。
扬起的嘴角，翻译成raise the mouth不太好，有点Chinglish.
如果不愿意意译成Having a smile, quirking（turning） up the corners of the mouth更正宗，是真正扬起嘴角的英文。就是长了点

Answer 6

a dream left me with a smile in the cornor of my lmouth, the you waking me, could say that I had a wonderful one.