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In many people’s eyes , I am the very person who is keen on eating . I like eating all kinds of things as to fruits , biscuits , bread , cookies , jellies and so on . talking about food , I cannot help referring to KFC , a famous fast-food restaurant all over the world . I know many of us , particularly the youth , relish the food in KFC , among whom I am one . so now I want to share with you some of my feelings about the food in KFC
Each time I patronize KFC , the essential food I will order is the Orleans Roast Chicken Wings(奥尔良烤翅)。 It is really a wonderful and toothsome food , which you will never forget after tasting once ! people who have enjoyed it before know I am not telling a lie . the roast chicken wings are barbecued moderately to golden color , sauced with tasty spices and kind of cayenne powder （辣椒粉）, and emitting an enticing odor , which makes you eat for more ! the tender and fresh flesh will impress upon you eternally. thereby, I can tell you firmly that it is out of the question for you to feel too full to enjoy one more wing . so remember to take enough cash with you if you are intent on fully enjoying the food .
Besides the celebrated roast wings , there is also another distinctive food waiting for you . that is the original recipe chicken (原味鸡)。it is fried to smell remarkably delicious . the surface of the chicken is spiced with pepper and other appetizing seasonings , strongly stimulating your appetite . it is universally acknowledged that the original recipe chicken is the initial product of KFC , depending on which KFC began entering the public’ s eyes . so when you make a date with KFC and feel rather hungry , trying the chicken is undoubtedly a wise choice .
After consuming so much meat , probably you will feel a little full and just want to touch something sweet , or something icy , especially in the sweltering summer . at this moment , you can enjoy some ice cream , such as fruit sundae(水果圣代冰淇淋)，or ice-cream cone(甜筒)，or some beverages such as juices , Pepsi-cola(百事可乐), 7-up(七喜) , and the like . that is really wonderful ! you have so many to choose from !
Saying goodbye to both the chicken and the drinks , if you are still curious about other kinds of food , and most importantly , if you pocket does not feel embarrassed then , you can still attempt other special and characteristic flavors , like egg tart (蛋挞) ， well-known hamburgers , fried ling(鳕鱼) ， corn salad , chicken loaf(鸡肉卷) , etc. they are all very yummy and will let you appreciate a good time !
Ok , as time is limited , I will stop here ! let’s discuss next time ! your advice or feelings are welcome here !
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追答In many people’s eyes , I am the very person who is keen on eating . I like eating all kinds of things as to fruits , biscuits , bread , cookies , jellies and so on . talking about food , I cannot help referring to KFC , a famous fast-food restaurant all over the world .
Besides the celebrated roast wings , there is also another distinctive food waiting for you . that is the original recipe chicken (原味鸡)。it is fried to smell remarkably delicious . the surface of the chicken is spiced with pepper and other appetizing seasonings , strongly stimulating your appetite .
After consuming so much meat , probably you will feel a little full and just want to touch something sweet , or something icy , especially in the sweltering summer . at this moment , you can enjoy some ice cream.
Ok , as time is limited , I will stop here ! let’s discuss next time ! your advice or feelings are welcome here !
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