英语作文 我的家乡(山西运城)
write an email to tell a classmate about your hometown. Include these points:1.places of interest2.local specialities3.people/transport/facilities字数80-100 google 语言工具 翻译出来的 不给分
Introduction of my hometown
--Yuncheng
Yuncheng is seat in the south of Shanxi province, which is skirted on three sides by Lvliang Mountains and Taihang Mountains, with one side opening onto Yellow River, having the total area about 24,000 square kilometers. Yuncheng is the most famous place and local people believe that it was called China earliest in story.
This ancient city has a approximately 5000 years history. From Chinese myth of Nvwa to Guanyu, archaeologists find many valuable sites here.
This wide piece of land reserves antiquity records of human’s using fire, making salt, growing crops, feeding silkworms and est. unexaggratingly speaking, Yuncheng, also named Hedong, which means in the east of river, is the cradle of Chinese civilization.
Compared with other cities, Yuncheng is the most richly endowed with some major natural resources for industry, especially energy resources such as iron, coal, and magnesium. Because of the abundance of sunshine and mild climate, Yuncheng has an ideal environment for many kinds of north fruits, like apple, to grow.
Never showing his long life from the date of human’s birth, tourist industry benefiting from the well development of transportation system, becomes an important part in Yuncheng’s economy.
You would find Buddhism in Wutai Mountain, enjoy your fantabulous view on Yellow River Bridge, touch those age-old compounds, and would also taste various kinds of delicious food made of flour.
Not only is it a historical city, but a modern city as well. Yon may like to find its beauty by your own.
Welcome to Yuncheng.
英语作文评分标准：
一档13-15分 包含所有要点，应用了较丰富的语言结构和词汇， 用词准确、语法正确、句子通顺、行文连贯、表达清楚，具有较强的语言运用能力。
二档10-12 分 基本包含所有要点，应用了较丰富的语言结构和词汇，句子较通顺，表达较清楚，但有少量错误。
三档7-9分 内容包含了多数要点，语言表达过于简单，句子不够通顺，有部分语言错误，基本上不影响总体理解。
四档4-6分 只包含了少数要点，语言不规范，句子无条理，行文不连贯，语言错误严重，影响理解。
五档1-3分 只写出与要求的内容相关的一些信息词语，语言错误多。
六档0分 空白。