假定你叫李华，最近，你的好友林浩来信说他升入高中以后感到不太适应，不知道如何结交新朋友。请你用英语给他回一封信，提出一些建议。提示：1、与人接触时要面带微笑、对别人又好。 2、关心同学、乐于助人。 3、学会倾听很重要，这样别人乐于和你相处。 4、积极参加班级活动并展示自己才能。 5、……（你的建议）才能：talent注意：1.词数130左右，信的格式已给出，但不计入总词数；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Lin Hao,Yours, Li Hua
| Dear Lin Hao, I’m glad to receive your letter. From your letter, I know you have the problem of how to make new friends in high school. The following are my suggestions. First, you should smile and try to be friendly when you meet people. You should also care about your schoolmates. If you are always ready to help them, they will understand you better. Second, it is important for you to be a good listener. That way, when people are with you, they will feel comfortable and happy. Finally, it is better for you to take an active part in class activities where you can show your talent. I hope my advice will be helpful to you. May you be happy in your new school. Yours Li Hua |
| 试题分析：这是一封书信，写的时候要注意书信的格式，内容要点给出了一个提纲，有四个要点，第五个建议要考生自己拓展，要选择合适的词汇和句型表达文章需要的意思，可以变换使用一些容易驾驭的句子或者词汇实现同样的目的。it is better for you to take an active part in class activities where you can show your talent.这句话使用了it做形式主语,用的很好，还要使用合适的连接词来连接各要点，使文章成为一个整体。如：first，second，finally等。 点评：除了注意书信的格式，表达方式的选择和要点的完备也很重要，要点不能有遗漏或者省略。也不能按照表格写出提纲式，所以在写作的时候要变换句式，同时要注意因为是邮件要写得亲切直白。不要过去堆砌。 点评： |