90后消防员牺牲新闻的英文版

Question

我们英语课要做presentation，希望将这篇新闻翻译成英文。

5月1日14时许，上海徐汇区龙吴路一高层居民楼突发火灾。两名消防员在扑救过程中牺牲。
　　记者从上海市消防局获悉，两名消防员在扑救火灾过程中，受轰燃和热气浪推力影响，从13楼坠落，送医抢救无效英勇牺牲。他们分别是1991年出生的钱凌云和1994年出生的刘杰，同是2012年12月入伍，为上等兵警衔。
　　其实，不仅仅是在上海，这几年里，“消防员牺牲”的新闻出现在多个城市。悼念逝者的同时，更多人在反思，高楼林立、人口密集的大城市，是否已经成为高危火灾的温床？一位不愿透露姓名的业内人士坦承，高楼确实增加了消防员工作的难度系数。

差不多就是这些内容了。怎么翻译？谢谢！！！！！

Answer 1

At two p.m of May 1st, two firefighters sacrificed themselves when putting out a fire to save people and property in a high-storey residential building on Longwu Road, Xuhui District, Shanghai Municipality.
A jounalist has leanrt from Shanghai Fire Stations that both of the firefighters were exposed to flashover and heat waves and fell off the 13th floor and were found dead in spite of emergent treatment at the hospital. They are Qian Lingyun, born in 1991 and Liujie, born in 1994 respectively and both were enlisted in December, 2012 and had police rank of Private, First Class.
However, in additon to the above-mention incident in Shanghai, many more "death of firefighters" have been reported in other cities in recent years. In memory of the deseased, many more people are trying to figure out whether or not a densely-pupulated metropolis with tall buildings serve as a hotbed of a highly risky fire. An insider acknowledgeed on the condition of anonymity that the taller building may make it more difficult for the firefighters to proceed with their work.

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