根据下面的翻译看看这些都对吗，有语法错误吗？有的话希望帮忙指出并改正 谢谢 ！！ 好的话我会加分 的 Hello everyone.I am XXX, my 20 years old, I come from XXX, a very beautiful coastal city.I am the only daughter in my family, My parents love me too much .Personality, I move off if the rabbit, such as Department of static son, cheerful with others, be able to communicate, but also be able to seriously deal with the completion of my task. At positions, and create maximum value for my own are my goals. A strong sense of responsibility on the job, an industrious, steadfast, focused on team spirit and collective concept. I believe that as long as seriously, there is no job should not competent
I have wide spread interests, I am curious about everything.But my favorite things are: listening to music , Go shopping, as well as other things related to fashion.I deeply love the fashion, I continuously thought decorating oneself is a way to expresses oneself, showing oneself is the best choice to prove your existence. I have a unique angle of view to look at something , and is enjoying every day positively and upwardly.when I have never blindly pursue fashion tidal current and lose myself, but can burn joyfully during the pursue .My English is not good, but I am take much effort on it.Moreover I believed I cannot let you be disappointed, I will try my best to achieves it well .Thank you very much for giving me this opportunity to stand here, thanks a lot!
我叫XXX，我20岁，我来自XXX，一个很美的城市.我是独生女，我拥有一对很爱我的父母。性格方面，我动若脱兔，静如处子，能够开朗的与他人交流，又能够认真严肃的对待我该完成的任务。在岗位中，创造我自己的最大价值是我的目标。对工作责任心强、勤恳踏实，注重团队合作精神和集体观念。我相信，只要认真对待，没有不能胜任的工作.我的兴趣广泛，对什么都充满好奇，但是最喜欢的事情还是：听音乐，购物，以及所有和时尚有关的事情.我热爱时尚，我一直认为装饰自己是表达自我的方式之一，展现自我是证明存在的最佳选择，我看待事物拥有独特的视角，积极向上地享受着的每一天，我从不盲目的追求时尚潮流时迷失自我，而会在追求目标时快乐的燃烧。我英文不好，但是我在为之努力。而且我相信我不会让你们失望，我会尽我所能的去把它做到最好。非常感谢给我这个机会站在这里，谢谢。