个人觉得
1、hope变成hopes。你要表达的意思应该是，“学校将会开展...活动，并且希望学生...”而不是“学校将会开展...活动，并且将会希望学生...”吧？
2、the students的the可去掉，没有特指哪些学生。
3、第二句话两个完整的句子中间必须有连词，才能构成复合句。可以改成：
To do/be a volunteer has many benefits, which can let us...
或
To do/be a volunteer has many benefits, and it can let us...
4、像1楼说的，社会society少了个e
1、hope变成hopes。你要表达的意思应该是，“学校将会开展...活动，并且希望学生...”而不是“学校将会开展...活动，并且将会希望学生...”吧？
2、the students的the可去掉，没有特指哪些学生。
3、第二句话两个完整的句子中间必须有连词，才能构成复合句。可以改成：
To do/be a volunteer has many benefits, which can let us...
或
To do/be a volunteer has many benefits, and it can let us...
4、像1楼说的，社会society少了个e
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第1个回答 2015-06-28
就着你写的内容稍作变动即可：
Our school will carry out volunteering activities recently. We hope that you are all actively participating. To be a volunteer has many benefits. It can provide us with more opportunities to get to know the society.
Our school will carry out volunteering activities recently. We hope that you are all actively participating. To be a volunteer has many benefits. It can provide us with more opportunities to get to know the society.
第2个回答 2015-06-28
最大的问题 - volunteer作名词配Do很奇怪。我会直接说volunteering has many benefits追答
Volunteer可以作动词，加上ing可以作名词主语的吧，相较简洁。。。
另外，建议把society改为community. 国外学校组织的社会实践叫community service
第3个回答 2015-06-28
最后一个单词society社会错了
第4个回答 2015-06-28
没错追问
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