第1个回答 2009-11-13
Hello!My name is …….I'm fifteen years old.I am a Chinese boy.I am
Lively and cheerful.
I am a good student.I like lerning English 、 reading books and playing computers.I am in Class …… Grade…….I like my teacher and my classmates.
I am very tall and thin.I have two big eyes.I like my look.Because think it is very beautiful.
This is me,I am a self-confidence boy. Would you be my friend do?
I hope to make friends with you?
第2个回答 2009-11-12
It is a pleasure to introduce myself to you. My name is XX, a boy of fifteen years old with extraversion of character. I am tall in stature and of thin build. I am always diligent in my studies, so I am among the best of the classmates in our class. I am fond of reading every kind of works, such as short stories, articles, and poems and so on. Besides, Computer is my favourite in my spare time. I like to look up something useful in the net to help with my studies. Of course, I also enjoy exercising on the school palyground. Therefor, I am in good health though I am thin. because I am one of the tallest in our class, I paly a role of center forward player in the class basketball team. I often get well with others, so I have quite a few friends. .
第3个回答 2009-11-12
我是个外国人,我的中文不太好。希望你还是能明白我的意思。
楼上的翻译不太地道。有的句子翻译有错误。
我不想替你做作文,可是我能帮你一下
英文里最基本的结构是:"I am 名词/形容词"
I am a boy (名词).
I am tall (形容词).
等等。
说英文的人很喜欢用"and"把形容词连在一起,比如:
I am big and strong.
I am tired and sleepy.
等等。
一个更有用的结构是"I am 名词片语"。英文里最常用的名词片语是"形容词 名词",比如:
I am a big(形容词) boy(名词)
I am a happy girl
"fifteen year old" 算形容词
I am a fifteen year old boy. 这个句子非常地道。
英国人喜欢用 hobby/hobbies(复数) 那个名词代表爱好:
我爱好X,y,z... -> My hobbies are x,y,z...
My hobbies are running and watching TV.
My hobbies are collecting stamps, fishing and listening to music.
等等
Good luck!
啊,对了。这是个中国人常常犯的错误: 在英文里有"make friends"那个词组,可是不可以说”make friends WITH 某人”。
"He easily makes new friends" (对)
"I made friends with him" (错)
用"get to know":
"If you want to get to know me, ..."
"I got to know him when we were roommates in College."