第1个回答 2009-11-13
Hello!My name is …….I'm fifteen years old.I am a Chinese boy.I am
Lively and cheerful.
I am a good student.I like lerning English 、 reading books and playing computers.I am in Class …… Grade…….I like my teacher and my classmates.
I am very tall and thin.I have two big eyes.I like my look.Because think it is very beautiful.
This is me,I am a self-confidence boy. Would you be my friend do?
I hope to make friends with you？
第2个回答 2009-11-12
It is a pleasure to introduce myself to you. My name is XX, a boy of fifteen years old with extraversion of character. I am tall in stature and of thin build. I am always diligent in my studies, so I am among the best of the classmates in our class. I am fond of reading every kind of works, such as short stories, articles, and poems and so on. Besides, Computer is my favourite in my spare time. I like to look up something useful in the net to help with my studies. Of course, I also enjoy exercising on the school palyground. Therefor, I am in good health though I am thin. because I am one of the tallest in our class, I paly a role of center forward player in the class basketball team. I often get well with others, so I have quite a few friends. .
第3个回答 2009-11-12
我是个外国人，我的中文不太好。希望你还是能明白我的意思。
楼上的翻译不太地道。有的句子翻译有错误。
我不想替你做作文，可是我能帮你一下
英文里最基本的结构是:"I am 名词/形容词"
I am a boy （名词）.
I am tall （形容词）.
等等。
说英文的人很喜欢用"and"把形容词连在一起，比如：
I am big and strong.
I am tired and sleepy.
等等。
一个更有用的结构是"I am 名词片语"。英文里最常用的名词片语是"形容词 名词",比如：
I am a big(形容词) boy（名词）
I am a happy girl
"fifteen year old" 算形容词
I am a fifteen year old boy. 这个句子非常地道。
英国人喜欢用 hobby/hobbies(复数) 那个名词代表爱好：
我爱好X,y,z... -> My hobbies are x,y,z...
My hobbies are running and watching TV.
My hobbies are collecting stamps， fishing and listening to music.
等等
Good luck!
啊，对了。这是个中国人常常犯的错误： 在英文里有"make friends"那个词组,可是不可以说”make friends WITH 某人”。
"He easily makes new friends" （对）
"I made friends with him" (错)
用"get to know":
"If you want to get to know me, ..."
"I got to know him when we were roommates in College."