第1个回答 2009-05-18
Good morning! It's my pleasure to introduce myself here.
My name is Liu Lin. I graduated from Hubei Water Resources Technical College in 2007. Before that, I worked as an intern in a real estate company, mainly dealing with office work and maintenance of its website. After graduation, I found a job as a software engineer in the processing factory of Yingtai Group. My job responsibilities there were software development and maintenance of softwares as well as hardwares.
Although my prior experience was in the field of computer science, my dream job has always been in foreign trade. And I think my skills in computer will help me a lot in doing foreign trade. I will go all out to acquire foreign trade knowledge and improve my English skills.
Finally, I would like to thank you for giving me this chance and I will work hard in return for your wise choice.
Thank you.
一楼和三楼文采较好,用词都比较丰富,特别是一楼的句子结构处理好,功力应该不错。我的句式简单,用词简单,多为简单句,容易背诵下来。如果打印在简历上,可以选择一楼的,如果记忆下来,可以选择我的。不过到面试的时候,自由发挥就是了。大家都给了你这么多了。
祝你成功!
第2个回答 2009-05-18
个人意见:如果对方是老外,那么开始的自我介绍应该偏重于个人方面而不是职业经理 - 老外的约定俗成。而且最好在3到4句话内结束。
自我介绍前,应该都”nice to meet you"了,所以这个good morning未必合适(仅供参考,我不清楚外贸行业的面试流程,但是在IT圈这个基本是适用的)。
所以建议楼主考虑一下这个自我介绍:
Hi, my name is XXX, you can call me 英文名. I come from XXX, a beautiful place (I guess:)). I do XXX in my leisure time. thanks.
然后接下来对方会问你具体的专业方面的事情。到时候再讲职业的经历不迟。
而且一般面试官根本没空在面试你之前看你的简历的,你自我介绍的时候他很可能在看你的简历,所以。。。
以上仅供参考。祝楼主好运。
第3个回答 2009-05-18
一楼的翻译句法不错,不过所谓自我介绍,应更偏向于口语化,而一楼同学的稍显书面了。。。建议如下。
Good morning, It is a great honor to take this chance to introduce myself here. My name is Liu Lin. I graduated from Hubei Water Resources Technical College in 2007. Before graduated, I worked as an office clerk in a property company in Wuhan and was responsible for the office routing affairs and maintenance of company's Website. then, after graduate, I joined in Biostar Group and became a software engineer in their manufacturing plant in Dongguan. my main job there is software development and software& hardware maintenance.
Although the work I used to do is mostly computer-related, my ideal job is something in foreign trade area. it is exactly the dream job that I have been persistently pursuing.
Thank you for giving me this opportunity. I will give all my effort to broader my knowledge on foreign trade and improving my English. at the same time, working hard and making my contribution as a return to your company.
Thank you!