How have changed I have many changed than I used.In the past,I'm very shocked and thin.But now,

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How have changed
I have many changed than I used.In the past,I'm very shocked and thin.But now, I'm very strong.I used to shy and always have red face.Now,I'm going and active.I used to be afraid of test,but now I like it.In the past, I like playing computer,but now I like playing football with my friends.I used to learn English by reading the word cards.now I learn English by watching English videos.I have so many changed,because I'm Grade9。
这么一篇英语初三作文，能打多少分大概，15分的满分。

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I used to be a very self-centered person, but in the past two years I have really changed. I have started to think about other people 36 I think about myself. I am happy that I am becoming a 37 person.
I think my 38 started when I was at Palomar College. At first, I just wanted to get my 39 and be left alone. I thought I was smarter than everyone else, so I hardly ever 40 to anyone in my classes. By the end of my first semester, I was really 41 . It seemed as if everyone but me had made friends and was having fun. So tried a(n) 42 . I started asking people around me how they were doing, and if they were having trouble I 43 to help. That was really a big 44 for me. By the end of the year, I had several new friends, and two of 45 are still my best friends today.
A bigger cause of my new 46 , however, came when I took a part-time job at a Vista Nursing Home. One old lady there who had Alzheimer’s disease became my 47 . Every time I came into her room, she was so 48 because she thought I was her daughter. Her real daughter never 49 her, so I took her place. She let me 50 . that making others feel good make me feel good, too, when she died, I was 51 , but I was very grateful to her.
I think I am a much 52 person today than I used to be, and I hope I will not 53 these experiences. They have 54 me to care about other people more than about myself. I 55 who I am today, and I could not say that a few years ago.追问

这是啥啊！我问的是我的作文能打多少分。