请英语达人帮忙改这篇求职信的语法。。

这是一封求职信,可能有很多语法错误,求英语达人帮忙改改,,,

I
read your advertisement for the position of Network Engineer on the newspaper,
I was just infatuated with it. This position matches my interests and
experiences completely, therefor I would like to apply for the vacancy.

As
you will see from my CV, I have a lot of work experiences about network
programing and testing of network instruments. I am used to handling different
problems of program such as developing a Monitor System for a server farm and
adding warning mechanism for it to avoid network accident. In addition, the
work experience as maintenance assistant at Network Instrument Company make me
has the skill, which I can deal with most kinds of hardware problems of today's
mainstream network instruments.

In
addition to my technical skill, my work experience in China and Germany
improved that I have ability to work with the partner, who speaks Chinese,
German or English. As part of team in my work experience, I can fluent and
effective communicate with my partner during the work, and always made valuable
suggestions.

I
believe that you will consider this application favorably and I wish to assure
you that I should make every effort to be worthy of the confidence you may place
in me. If you require any further
information, I am available for a telephone interview at any time.

Trusting
you will give my application kind consideration and hoping to hear favorably
from you at your convenience.

With
many thanks,

1 therefor =>therefore
2 experience表经验时不可数。表经历可数

3 technical skill=》technical skill

4 improved that =》proves that

5 As part of team in my work experience, I can fluent and
effective communicate with my partner during the work, and always made valuable
suggestions.========================>
As a part of the teams in my work experience, I could communicate with my partners fluent ly and effectively during the work, and always made valuable
suggestions.
6 I believe that you will consider this application favorably and I wish to assure
you that I should make every effort to be worthy of the confidence you may place
in me.===============>
I hope that you will consider this application favorably and I would like to assure
you that I would make every effort to be worthy of the confidence you might place
in me.
7Trusting you will give my application kind consideration and hoping to hear favorably from you at your convenience.
====================>
i believe that you will give kind consideration to my application and I hope to hear favorably from you at your convenience.
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