第1个回答 2007-03-11
It's a dream that Alice once had on a summer day a long time ago.In that strange dream,the rabbit is wearing white gloves,the caterpillar is smoking a pipe...the crazy hat man and the March rabbit are always drinking tea.And the queen of hearts wants to cut off everyone's head...The stroy is very strange,but everything can happen in the dreamland.
Perhaps you will think such a fairy tale seems too childish to a person of my age. However, I think, so long as we keep a childlike innocence, an excellent fairy tale world will appear before us, and can let us understand a lot of things. Only people with a pure mind could enter a colorful and dazzling dreamland world like that.They are angels living in fond dream and imagination. Their world is always so interesting and fascinating. Let us come into this wonderful fairyland with Alice!
祝你睡个好觉！
第2个回答 2007-03-11
你的英语很好啊,自己翻的英语?我不如你了,as keep 是否应该改成as keeping,Wonder本来就有奇境的意思,似乎可以替代wonderful fairyland ,age such as me 不太通,可以改成who is old enough just like me ,"在这梦的奇境里"后面的排比句要用and 连接,中间逗号可以去掉,有气势点.pure people 可否改为naive people. 第一句dreamt 和 dream重复了,可以换成have.暂时这些,恩?
第3个回答 2007-03-12
This loves the Li silk in very early beforehand summer day dream. In this dream wonderful boundary, the white rabbit wears the white gloves, the larva aculeata is attracting the tobacco pipe ......Insane makes cap the human and in March rabbit is always drinking tea, but hearts queen wants to reduce each person's head ...... This story is very strange, but, any can occur in the dreamland.
Perhaps you can think this kind of fairy tale appears weakly regarding I such age, but, I thought, so long as maintains a childlike innocence, a splendid fairy tale world then can appear in you at present, and can let you understand very many things. Only then the chaste people can enter such all colors variegated, the powerful and unconstrained style dreamland world, they are the life in the fond dream and the imagination angel, here world so is always novel interesting. Lets us and likes the Li silk entering together this marvelous fairyland! 。 以下四正确回答。
第4个回答 2007-03-12
给你个完全对照
这是爱丽丝在很早以前一个夏日里的梦。
It's the dream that Alice dreamt in a summer a long time ago.
It was a dream that Alice dreamed in a summer years ago.
说梦的时候，就好像说故事一样，所以用a，不用特指，注意过去的梦用was
在这梦的奇境里，白兔戴着白手套，毛虫吸着烟斗……
In that strange dream,the rabbit were wearing white gloves,the caterpillar were smoking a pipe...
In that curious dream, (a rabbit was)(rabbits were) wearing white gloves, and a caterpillar(确定不是青虫warm?) was smoking a pipe…
注意单复数，
疯了的制帽人和三月兔总是在喝茶，而红桃王后要砍掉每一个人的头……
the crazy person who was making hat and March rabbit were always drinking tea.And the queen of hearts wanted to cut down everyone's head...
a mad hat-maker was drinking teas with a rabbit March all the time, and a queen of hearts wants to cut off everyone’s heads.
形容人思想用mad,形容动作用crazy，砍头cut off heads
这故事很奇怪，可是，在梦境里什么都会发生。
The stroy was(is) very strange,but everything could happen in (the) dreamland.
This story is very strange, but in dreams everything happens. 仅供参考，如果用过去时，意思就是现在看来不奇怪了。
也许你会觉得这样一篇童话对于我这样的年龄显得幼稚，不过，我觉得，只要保持一颗童心，一个精彩的童话世界便会出现在你的眼前，并且能让你明白很多东西。
Perhaps you will think such a fairy tale seems inmature to age such as me(the age of mine), however, I think, so long as keep a childlike innocence(这句%^&*), an excellent fairy tale world will appear before you, and can let you understand a lot of things.
Perhaps you do(might) think such a fairy tale is naïve for my age, but what I think is, as long as you have a child’s heart, a wonderful world of fairy tales would appear in front of you, and this, could sometimes tell you a lot.
will表示非常肯定，might表示有可能，do表示强调语气，也许你会。最后一句仅供参考，
只有纯洁的人们才能进入那样五彩斑斓、天马行空的梦境世界，他们就是生活在美梦与想象中的天使，这里的世界总是那么新奇、有趣。
Only pure people could enter the dreamland worlds of riot of color, powerful and unconstrained style like that, they are angels living in fond dream and imagination, the world here is always so novel, （and）interesting.
pure people纯人类
Only those people with pure souls could find that colorful marvellous and fantastic dreamland. They are the angels who have been living between the fantasies and imaginations. How novel and fabulous the world always is. 我用这几个形容词是英国人常用的，也跟意思很贴切，仅供参考
就让我们和爱丽丝一起走进这奇妙的仙境吧！
Let us come into this wonderful fairyland with Alice!
Just let us walk into this amazing wonderland with Alice (now). 词汇仅供参考。
主要问题是单复数，时态和冠词的用法，可以多参考些简单的故事书，词汇量对演讲帮助很大哦，我尽量给你做参考，可以不用的。
祝你演讲成功。
第5个回答 2007-03-12
This is the dream of Alice Lane in a summer long ago. In this dream sky, a rabbit wearing white gloves, Caterpillar Xizhuoyan struggle…… Mad Hatter and the March of the rabbit always tea peach queen and the first to be cut down every person…… very strange story, but what will happen in a dream Lane. You may think that this is an age of the children for me naive, but I feel that if you have heart one of the highlights of the musical world will be in your eyes, and gives you understand many things. People can enter only as a pure capital of south, imaginative dream world. They live in dreams and imagine an angel, the world is always so strange here, it is interesting. Let us work together and enter this amazing Alice in Wonderland!