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我叫XX,曾经在江西省上饶县中学读书.在高中的时候我就对计算机很感兴趣,所以自学了计算机的一些基础知识.为了能更好的学习,我在家也买了台电脑.所以,这么多年我的计算机水平有了很大的提高.如:独立、熟练的安装、操作windows各个版本的操作系统,并能熟练的使用office、photoshop、msn等常用工具、软件。但一些高级的程序汇编语言我还是不能熟练的掌握。所以,我想到XXX学习更深入、更完善的计算机课程。
关于上次撤签证的事情,不是我不想去,而是因为我已经等的开学的时间都过了,我还没有收到使馆的任何消息。并且,XX已经重新发了一份2007年2月份的入学通知书,所以我就撤签了!
那边的老师说我写的不够充分。。需要中文写的详细些。。希望大家能给点帮助!

你们翻译出来是这样的
1>我叫XX, 一次学习在江西省Shangrao 县middleschool 在高school's 时间I 上午非常感兴趣对thecomputer, 因此独立地学习了someelementary knowledges 为能一项更好的研究的计算机, 我并且买computerin 家所以, 我的计算机水平有thevery 大改进例如的这样许多岁月: 独立, skilledinstallment, 操作窗口各编辑操作系统, andcan 熟练的用途办公室, photoshop, msn 等等共同地usedtool, 软件。但一些高级做法汇编语言I orcannot 熟练掌握。所以, 我认为XXX 研究是morethorough, 更加完善的计算机课程。时间去除签证在问题上, 不是我不想要多哥, 而是是因为我已经等开始schoolall 横渡的时间, 我未接受使馆任一新闻。并且, XX rehasalready 被送2007 年2月注册书面通知, 因此Iremoved 标志!

2>我叫XX, 中学一次读一本书在江西省Shang Rao 县。在高中的期间, 我立即是感兴趣非常对计算机, 因此被学习计算机某一ABC independently.For 能学习很好, 我在家并且买计算机。所以, 我的计算机是这样许多岁月水平把非常大上升的。譬如: 并且独立, 熟练的设施, 处理各windows's OS 的编辑, 能量贯彻, 软件在共同的使用譬如熟练的办公室, photoshop, msn 。但一种小的高等级做法汇编语言我是无法熟练的grasping.Therefore, 我认为XXX 研究更加详尽, 更加完善的计算机课。 关于事去除签证上次, 不是我不想要去对, 而是计时期限全部的起点以后, 我没有任何信息接受使馆由于我已经等待。并且, XX 已经再派出了, 2007 个份额入口2月银行通知单, 因此我去除了标签!
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第1个回答  2007-02-20
My name is XX. I used to study in the middle school of the Town of Shangrao in Jiangxi Province. I was quite interested in computer when I was in senior middle school,so I studied some basic knowledges of computer. In order to carry on further studying,I also had a computer at home.So in these years I made great progress in computer application,such as Installing and using all versions of the Microsoft Windows Operating System easily by myself,and use many kinds of common tools and softwares like Micrsoft Office,Adobe Photoshop,MSN Messenger proficient.But I still cannot use some advanced programmes and Assembly Languages well.So I want to study in XXX school to have further education on computer.
About last time I removed my visa,it was not I didn't want to get there,but after the school started,i still can't receive anything from the embassy.Also, XX have resent me a new offer of February,2007,so I removed the visa!

绝对是人工翻译的
第2个回答  2007-02-12
I call XX, ever at river the west province up the high school of 饶 County study.At the time of senior high school I is very interested in to the calculator, so self-educated some foundation knowledge of the calculator.For canning be better to study, I also bought the set computer at home.So, so my calculator level of many years contain very big exaltation.Such as: independence, the operate system of the well-trained gearing, the operation windows each edition, and in common use tool, software of well-trained usage office, photoshop, msn etc. of ability.But some procedures of high class edit collected materials the language I am still can't masterly of control.So, I thought of that the XXX study is more thorough, more perfect calculator course.
Concerning the affair that withdraws the visa last time, is not I do not want to go to, but because time that school begins that I have already wait leads, I have not yet received any news of the legation.And, the XX hases already re- deliver for a February of 2007 to enter school the notification, so I withdraw to sign!
应该是这样!
第3个回答  2007-02-26
I call XX, once studied in the Jiangxi Province Shangrao County middle school. In high school's time I on am interested very much to the computer, therefore has studied independently the computer some elementary knowledge. For could a better study, I also buy the Taiwan computer in the home. Therefore, the such many year my computer level had the very big enhancement. For example: Independent, the skilled installment, operates windows each edition the operating system, and can skilled use office, photoshop, msn and so on the commonly used tool, the software. But some high-level procedure assembly language I cannot skilled grasping. Therefore, I thought XXX study is more thorough, the more perfect computer curriculum. About previous time removes the visa the matter, is not my does not want to go, but is because I already waited for the time which began school all to cross, I have not received the embassy any news. And, XX has already sent one February, 2007 matriculation written notice, therefore I removed sign!

我为您翻译得怎么样?
第4个回答  2007-02-12
My name is xxx,usded to study in Shangrao Middle School,Jiangxi Province. I was interested in computer since I was in high school,as a result I studied some basic knowledges by myself.I also bought a computer at home,so that I could take futher study at it. After so many years' study, my computer level has improved a lot. For instance,I can install and operate windows operation system of all editions independently and I am also practiced in operation of wome common software like office、photoshop、msn etc.But I am still not so familar with assemble language of high-level program,which is the reason I want to go to xxx to take my advanced study in computer.
Regarding my remove visa last time,it is not because I am not willing to go,but because the time of term begin has already passed however I did not get any news from the embassy by that time. Besides,xxx has re-sent a matriculation notice of Feb,2007 to me,that's why I withdrawed.本回答被网友采纳
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