写作思路:从“我的生日”的写作目的、中心主旨入手,可以简略的介绍一下又谁参加了自己的生日活动,之后描述生日活动内容是什么,最后总结生日过的如何,正文:
Today is my birthday. My mother took me to Hollyland to pick up the cake in the morning. When I arrived at the hotel, my grandparents, my grandmother and my family and friends all came to my birthday party.
今天是我的生日,妈妈早上带我去好利来取蛋糕,到了饭店,我的爷爷奶奶,姥姥老爷,还有我家的亲朋好友,都来参加我的生日宴会。
We turned off the lights, my mother put candles in me, and I made a wish. Then everyone clapped their hands and sang a birthday song to me. I was very happy at that time, and of course I ate delicious cakes. We were very full. I am so happy today. I am really happy!
我们关了灯,妈妈给我插上了蜡烛,我许了个愿,然后大家拍着手给我唱生日歌,当时我特别高兴,当然还吃了好吃的蛋糕,我们吃的特别饱,我今天太高兴了,真是幸福啊!
写作思路及要点:审清题目,确定中心,选择材料。
Tomorrow is my birthday. That day is coming, so I decided to make a plan for it.
明天是我的生日,那一天就要到了,所以我决定为它制定一个计划。
In the morning, my mother will go shopping with me. We want to buy some delicious food.
早上,我妈妈将和我一起去购物。我们要买些好吃的。
Then, I will invite my classmates to my birthday party.
然后,我会邀请我的同学来参加我的生日聚会。
We can sing, dance and play games.
我们可以唱歌、跳舞和做游戏。
I look forward to that day.
我期待着那一天。
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