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Question

你好，我是这个学校的新学生，我已经参加了这个学校的入学考试，我的英文不是很好，所以没有弄清楚我被编到了哪个班，我该上哪个教室上课，我应该准备什么东西？

Answer 1

【说明】根据语境，是要到国外上学啦，恭喜！如果是口头交流，或者打电话，就口语化一些，如果是写信，还要哦注意格式。
【口头】Hello! I’m a freshman here passed all the enrollment exams. I wonder which class shall I be in, which classroom shall I go to, and what materials shall I bring to attend the lectures? You see, my English level is just surviving… Could you give me a hand? Thank you!
【分析】
* 新学生：常用freshman,而不用new student,男女通用。
* 这个学校：用here可以很简洁地表达出来意思，不用啰嗦。
* 英文不好放到最后翻译，作为一个客观原因。如果放到前面就太突出了。
* 上课：attend the lectures是很地道，常见的说法。go to class太书生气。
* 英文不太好：surviving很生动，说明可以简单理解一些必需的东西，还过得去，但碰到有些问题就不行了。
* you see：口语化，缓冲语气作用，没实际意义。
【书面】
【说明】日期靠右；Yours；名字都靠右。Dear sir顶格靠左。
July 15, 2008
Dear Sir/Madam,
Hello! I am a freshman passed all the enrollment exams. Due to my rather low level of English, I am confused as to which class I was assigned to, which classroom shall I go to, and, in order to attend the lectures, what materials shall I prepare. Therefore, I would be very grateful if you can help me with the above problems. Thank you a million!
Yours,
[你的名字]
【分析】作为书面语，里面有很多正式的措辞和句式，例如Due to，Therefore，grateful等。

Answer 2

Hollo, I am this school new student, I already participated in this school entrance examination, my English is not very good, therefore which class hasn't clarified I to arrange, does my this on which classroom attend class, what thing should I prepare?

Answer 3

hi, I am this school new student, I already participated in this school entrance examination, my English was not very good, therefore which class hasn't clarified I to arrange, which classroom do I deserve to attend class, what thing should I prepare?

Answer 4

Hello, I was the school's new students, I have participated in the school entrance examination, my English is not good, so I was not clear about which course and classroom did you assign me to and what should I prepare for school?

Answer 5

hello,I am a fresh man in your school,I have attended the enterance examination,but my English is not very good,so I am not clear that which class I am arranged in,which classroom should I go to have my classes,and what should I prepare for?

Answer 6

Hi,

I am a new student. I have taken the admission exam. My English is not so good that I am still confused which class I was assigned to and which classroom I should go to. What do I need to prepare?

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