APP company Mr. Peter Margin next Monday to New York next week, may not have the time to meet with you. So he hope at nine in the morning on Friday 30 to meet you, discuss the cooperation of both sides of the issues. Asked whether you have free time? Hope you receive a message to call as soon as possible after Mr. Peter Margin.
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