急需150--170字左右的英文作文，主题是我的梦想。 希望内容里有我的梦想是成为一个计算机工程师。

Question

但当我长大后，走上了艺术生路之后，我的梦想想成为设计师，但梦想的路还很长，还需要我付出好多努力。希望写的写的有点内涵。 尽量短些，是口语考试。

Answer 1

When I was a little boy , I had endless dream.
My dream like a wide lea , which have too many dreams running together.
But , I only have a dream now. What's it ? It is become a computer engineer.
In many years ago , I was a poor boy , however , I am positively face it.
I strive to save money.When I was a third grade primary school pupil.
How glad I can buy the computer in the end.
I am start it amusedly.It like my life door was opening.
At that time, computer was my best friend.
So, I decided I will be a computer engineer.
Now I set a project for myself that If I become a computer engineer , I must raise to college.
If I want to raise to college , I will learn more and more english.
everyone both have too many dreams .
But , Do you make it clear that what is your objective? Yes , I do
How about you? I really wish you also have it.追问

没中文版的嘛？不会有语法错误的地方吧，呵呵。冒昧的问一句。

追答

我检查了一遍，应该不会有什么错误了
When I was a little boy , I had endless dreams.
My dreams seemed a wide sea , which had too many dreams running together.
But , I only have a dream now. do you know what's it ? It is becoming a computer engineer.
Many years ago , I was a poor boy .however , I was actively faced with it.
When I was a student in Grade Three.I'm very eager to buy a computer.
So I strived to save money and bought a computer in the end. Then I started my dream amusedly.It opened the door of my
dream.At that time, computer was my best friend.
From that time on, I decided I would be a computer engineer.
Now I set a goal for myself that If I want to become a computer engineer , I must go to college.If I want to go to college , I must learn more and more English.
Everyone has many dreams .But , do you make it clear that what is your real dream?Yes , I do!
How about you? I really wish you also have it.

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没中文的啊

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