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请帮我修改下下面的文章,将一些语法错误改正一下,在适当加些东西.作业 急~~
Pandas
Pandas are national treasure of China,they are cute.
Their trunks and tail are white,but their ears, eyes and extremities are black.They live in China.Bamboos are pandas’ favorrite food,they also eat meat. Usually,they can exist 15 years.When they 1 year old,they exist independence.
Pandas don’t hibernate,so,we can see them in winter.They can swimming very well,but they are afraid hot weather.
Now,pandas are very few.We should safeguard them.Only like this,they can exist well.

Answer 1

熊猫

熊猫是中国的国宝，它们很可爱。它们的躯干和尾巴是白色，但是它们的耳朵、眼睛、手脚是黑色的。它们居住在中国。竹子是熊猫最喜欢的食物。它们也吃肉。通常，它们可以活15年。当他们一岁多的时候，它们就可以独立生活。熊猫不冬眠，所以我们在冬天也能看到它们。它们也会游泳，游的还不错，但是它们害怕炎热的天气。现在，熊猫已经比较稀有。我们应该好好保护它们。只有这样，它们才能生活得更好。

ps，they can swimming very well这句错了，应该是they can swim very well.

Answer 2

Pandas

Pandas are the national treasure in China. Their cute appearences attract people from all over the world.
Their trunks and tails are white, but their eyes, ears and extremities are black. Jokely speaking, they have the most fshionable appearence in the animal world, and it will never out of trend.
Baboos are their favorite food, but they also sometimes eat meat. Usually,they can grow up to 15 years old. And when they are only 1 year old, they can already live on their own.
Now, pandas are very few. We all human beings should protect this cute animal. Only under our protection and love, they can live well.本回答被提问者采纳