谁能帮我找一下错？

Question

my classmate
this is my classmate.
she is tall and slim.she has long straight black hair.she has a wide forehead and two small eyes.She has a medium nose and her nose is a little bit flat.she has a peaky chin. she is good looking.
do you know what is her name? she is Jennifer.
急呀！！

Answer 1

1、do you know what is her name --
do you know what her name is
2、long straight black hair --
black long straight hair
3、每句话的开头记得要大写，不要用太多的简单句，可以用并列句或者复合句将它缩为更短的几句话，因为这样看起来给人的感觉太累赘．

Answer 2

two small eyes这个肯定不对,英语没有这样说的习惯吧

Answer 3

do you know what is her name
do you know what her name is本回答被提问者采纳