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1. In my opinion
Macau is not a very safe place. 2. I find that there are many crimes in the street especially pickpockets. 3. I think we must lock our doors and windows properly to avoid thieves entering our house.
参考: myself
1.我应为澳门是一个不是很安全的地方 1. I should not Macao is a very safe place 2.我觉得在街上发生的罪案比较多
因为人们通常在街上偷别人的东西
例如钱包
手袋
手机等 2. I think that the crimes mitted on the streets more
because people are usually on the streets to steal other people's things such as wallets
handbags
cell phones
e 3.我认为我们睡觉前做好锁好门窗等工作
可以使到被偷窃的可能性减少 3. I think we do a good sleep before the locked doors and windows
and so on
so that could be to reduce the possibility of theft
Hi
I have o versions for you
please feel free to pick either one. Version one: I don't think Macow is a very safe place. ( In English grammar
you do not say things like" I think this is not a safe place". It is because " I think" is positive while " this is not a safe place" is negative. I put " I don't think" ( negative) in the front to follow the rules of grammar. These are the rules. Positive + positive
Negative + positive <---- Correct! negative+negative and positive + negative <===== Wrong! I have realized that street crimes occur more than any other types of crimes. It is mainly because there are quite a large number of thieves and pickpockets looking for their targets to steal their belongings such as their handbags
purses
mobile phones and so forth in many many dense areas . I strongly think we really must lock up before we go to bed in order to lessen the probability of any burglaries being mitted. Here es my version o: I don't think Macow is a very safe place. I notice that there are more crimes being mitted in the streets because lots of thieves and pickpockets are very active outside there and they like to steal people's properties like wallets
handbags
mobile phones
e If we want to have sweet dreams without worrying about our properties
we should lock all our doors and windows properly before we hit the sack. In this way
the probability of being burglarized will be reduced. That's it. :) Good luck! Regards 2008-10-11 00:33:29 补充： Macau <------ I mistyped this word. Use" Macau" please. 2008-10-11 13:33:58 补充： A pickpocket is a theif who picks pockets. Pocket-picking is the act of the crime. The word" CRIMES " in 007's sentence doesn't match the word" pickpockets"( about the thieves
not a kind of crime).
I suppose Macau is not a very safe place. I get an impression that there are quite a lot of crimes on the streets where people usually steal from others things like purses
handbags and mobile phones e I think it is better for us to lock the windows and doors before we go to bed to reduce the chance of burglary.
I think that Aomen is a dangerous place. I think the case in the street is more because people always steal something from others such as handbag
phone
wallet...... I think we should lock the door and close the window before we sleep because it can decrease the chance of rob by others.
007 is the best one so far.
1.我应为澳门是一个不是很安全的地方 I think Macao is not a very safe place 2.我觉得在街上发生的罪案比较多
因为人们通常在街上偷别人的东 西
例如钱包
手袋
手机等 I think crime happened on the street more often because people usually stole things on the street
such as wallets
bags and mobile phone. 3.我认为我们睡觉前做好锁好门窗等工作
可以使到被偷窃的可能性 减少 I think we should lock the door and windows before we sleep.It can reduce the chance of being stolen.
hi... 第1 同第3 个答案完全唔得... grammar 错晒... 第2 就ok.... 少少修改...: 2008-10-10 13:22:35 补充： 2. I think.... use "crime" not "criminal".... use "on the street"... not "in the street"
1. I should be Macao am not the very safe place 2. I think the criminal case which occurs on the street to be quite many
because the people usually steal others' thing on the street
for example wallet
handbag
handset and so on 3. before I think us to sleep
plete lock work and so on windows and doors
may cause to reduce by larceny's possibility. 2008-10-16 13:14:18 补充： roytse is the best!!!
参考: me
hi
I'm studying in u.s. I hope i can help you but my spelling may wrong.. 1.我应为澳门是一个不是很安全的地方 I think Macao is not a safe place. 2.我觉得在街上发生的罪案比较多
因为人们通常在街上偷别人的东西
例如钱包
手袋
手机等 I think street is the most ment please where the crimes like to steling people's stuff. For example
wallet
purse or cell phone.e 3.我认为我们睡觉前做好锁好门窗等工作
可以使到被偷窃的可能性减少 I think we can make the crimes less for close up oure window before we sleep.
参考: myself
1. I think Macau is not a safety place. (应该是「认为」) 2. I think there is many criminal happened in the street
since people usually thieving in the street. Such as
wallet
handbag
mobile phone
e 3. I think we should locked the door and windows before sleep. The probability of stolen will be decreased.
参考: 自己