第1个回答 2019-05-04
1. an old man
2. who often
2. very annoyed
4.删掉 with
5. to break
6. so 改成 but
7. break the sticks individually
8. each of them
9. in peace
10. they would fail
2. who often
2. very annoyed
4.删掉 with
5. to break
6. so 改成 but
7. break the sticks individually
8. each of them
9. in peace
10. they would fail
第2个回答 2019-05-04
行1：a改为an追答
行2：whom 改为 who
行3：annoying 改为annoyed
行4: 删除with
行6：breaking 改为 break
行7：so 改为 but
行9：is 改为was
行10：each 和them中间加of
行12：peaceful 改为peace
行13：you 改为 they
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