这段英文有错误吗

I have readed the contract,and the questions are followed :
1.How about the wages of probation period,is it 3500?
2.How do I go through into the duty formalities?

要表达的意思是:我已经看了合同,有以下问题想请教:
1、试用期工资是多少,是2800吗?
2、我如何办理入职手续?

如有误,请指出?并请翻译为谢!

第1个回答  2009-11-23
呃~其实是有一些小问题的啊~

1,read过去时和过去分词都是read啊,没有readed之说……

2,and the questions are followed不是中国人的肯定看不懂啊,再说这不是个句子,还不符合语法啊~可以考虑换成:and I have several questions as following to ask you。

3,工资是3500还是2800啊?再者,是yuan 还是 dollor?应该说清楚啊~

4,你的第二个问题看不大懂啊~可以试试:
How should I fulfill the formalities of taking office ?
第2个回答  2009-11-23
I have readed the contract,and the questions are followed :(read,are as follow)
1.How about the wages of probation period,is it 3500? (3500还是2800?)
2.How do I go through into the duty formalities?( go through后面不用再加into了 尽管不知道你这句话是要说什么)
第3个回答  2009-11-23
I have seen the contracts and would like to ask the following questions:
1.How about the salaty(月薪)in probation period?Is it 3500?
2.How to process new employees' enrollment?本回答被提问者采纳
第4个回答  2009-11-23
I have (read) the contract,and the questions are followed :

1.How about the wages of probation period,is it 3500?
2.How (to go through formalities of entering the duty)?
第5个回答  2009-11-23
对 不错
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