这篇英语作文语法顺序对不对 如 注：已去过

Question

Going to the zoo
I want to the zoo。There had many animals。
First，I saw zebra。It was exciting.Next,I climbed Monkey mountain.It was tiring.
Then,I saw lions.It was frightening.After that,I saw panda.It was interesting. I very like panda.

Answer 1

A Trip to the Zoo (原题目不妥哈)
Last weekend, I went to the zoo. (这里估计LZ是打错字了，去动物园用go的过去式went，want是想要的意思了)
There were many animals. (这里用there be的句型，表示某地有某物)
First, I went to see zebras. (zebra是可数名词，不能以单数形式单独存在，即是要么用它的复数，要么前面加冠词才行。这里选择用名词复数形式，表示一类事物)
I went ot climb to the monkey mountain. (猴山前面要加the)
I saw pandas.（这里也是要用复数，表一类事物）
I like pandas very much/ a lot. （表示非常喜欢，very much或是a lot要放后面，不能放like前面哈。）追问

First, I went to see zebras【see不用过去式吗】. (zebra是可数名词，不能以单数形式单独存在，即是要么用它的复数，要么前面加冠词才行。这里选择用名词复数形式，表示一类事物)

追答

亲，你仔细看下，我改了你的句子了哦。这里我用了go to do sth，是过去式，所以go变went了，成了went to see...哈

追问

请回答一下go to do sth是什么 （我无知了）

追答

go to do sth就是去做什么事情呀，字面上的事情哦。你是要在动物园里逛，想说先去看了什么，再看了什么之类的，对吧？那么我觉得第一个看还是加上方向动词go更加生动些哦，也可以避免句子过短，还有就是重复太多次同一句型。

Answer 2

错了 里面语法错误挺多的追问

说明一下 不然我不知道

Answer 3

There had many animals 应该是there were
zebra 要加s
It was frightening 改成they were
panda加s
It was interesting 改成they were
I very like panda.这句话被我们老师看到你完了= = 典型中国式的 应该是 i like pandas very much...
鉴于你的文章有指代不明的情况我尽力了...

Answer 4

英语句法中常见四个问题：choppy \ run-on\fragment\stringy , choppy --句子太短 ，连起来看上去断层过多，就像你上面这些句子。另外语法时态都有问题。
我帮你修改一下：
Go to the Zoo!
I wang to go to the zoo where there are many animals.
After entering the zoo , I was so exciting when I saw the zebra first . Then , I went to see the monkey mountain where some monkeys were sitting on it ,and they liked tired .
Then I went to see the lion which I felt frightening , and after that , I went to see the Panda which I am very interested in , and I like it very much .